|Reviews for Alley Cat|
| Lunaris-wind 12/5/12 . chapter 1
I loved this for all the right reasons. Good job, and I hope Alice rips him a new one next time he tries anything.
| PraiseFortheFallen 4/17/12 . chapter 1
Cant believe Im so late on finding this. Very good.
| irelandk 11/6/11 . chapter 1
| nzuri94 9/2/11 . chapter 1
wow I usually hate bdsm stories bt this was really good. Bella knew what alice needed and she didn't stop until she gave it to her. In a weird way this was really sweet and rmantic.
| Random Peep 5/28/11 . chapter 1
Loved it, awesome job! Very well written, with complex emotions, I just love it. P
| sweetandsaltyff 2/28/11 . chapter 1
Wow, what a wonderfully complex and well-written story! Fantastic job, I enjoyed it very much! Thank you for writing and sharing!
| sugar92 2/25/11 . chapter 1
awwwwwwwwwwww this was SO CUTE! *-*
i'm always most sincere in my reviews, so... please bear with me.
So, writing style is wonderful, the main character's train of thoughts is coherent with her highs (-/-) and lows, though i haven't ever understood much how her character can change like that. I mean, ...in the "levels" i've got in my mind, in the beginning Bella is lower and Alice's higher. however later the thing turn upside down. This isn't the first fic where i've seen this thing but it upset cause i'm permanently on the "lower/lowest step" and i can't understand how characters would change like that...
Maybe i'm thinking this cause in most fics i've read characters are very "stable" and all.. i don't know..-.-
i was astonished about the nicknames but eventually later i've got used to them.. " i liked "B" more, and i laughed at the "Belll-aaahr, won't you pet my kitty?" one. i was like "XDXDXDXD" and i couldn't stop! "
of course i loved the whole fic but particulary some things, because they were/are also my thoughts, first is
the "this. this. this!" part. wonderful. pure bliss. : )
but as lame as i am, i thumbd up the whole lemon scene. especially the 2nd part ; ) man...that was priceless! -
so, great work.
| eddiescherry 2/22/11 . chapter 1
The premise was not my bag, but the execution of it was stellar. V, v well done.
| projectviviana 2/20/11 . chapter 1
This was absolutely wonderful. Intense. Emotional. Raw. I can't even tell you exactly how much I loved this. I'm like speechless to the awesomeness of this O/S. Although Bella was being the dominant one, she was showing Alice her strength and power. The trust Alice put in Bella... just amazing. That's fucking love right there. True love. Also, you write so beautifully. I loved the descriptions when they were making love. *Le sigh*
There were my favorite quotes/passages:
"I choke back an unexpected sob as we go over that edge together with a timing to our crescendo that I couldn't have written if I'd tried. We shudder and pulse against each other, clutching and crying out and gasping for air. This moment, God or the Goddess or the infinite or whatever the fuck is out there is right here, right now because this is the infinite. This, this, this."
""I have other plans for you, kitten."
I hear the sharp intake of her breath as she registers the edge to my tone and the pet name we save for a very particular kind of interaction."
Good luck in the contest!
- V xoxo
| lemonmartinis 2/18/11 . chapter 1
Very intense and beautifully written.
I have to be honest with the fact that I'm not a slash reader but this story was just fab.
Thanks for writing
| winterstale 2/16/11 . chapter 1
So many stories in the BDSM fanfic subgenre just miss the depth of trust and communication between a sub and Dom/me. Alley Cat illustrates the intensity and connection present in this kind of encounter so perfectly. The level of attentiveness, care, and self-awareness a good Dom/me must have is completely woven through every word in this story. I really appreciate the amount of work you've put into making this story something more than the usual BDSM PWP.
Then, there's this specific, exquisitely realized world you've added to the careful research and that's what makes Alley Cat sing for me. The alternative universe as well as the alternative Alice and Bella make sense to me, their voices and actions ring true for who we've come to know as 'Bella' and 'Alice' but you've taken them so much farther on a new path.
Be proud. You've married texture, character, a strong plot, and done justice to alternative themes that rarely get the depth of craft you exhibit here. I'm thrilled to see the result and you always have my vote, dearie. I've enjoyed watching you go through this process and am thrilled with your end result!
| LostinStories 2/16/11 . chapter 1
Exceptionally well written. It completely blew me away.
The way you captured the trust that needs to be there when you take a relationship to that level was great, it was real. The characters were very real and easy to inditify with.
Very original and very pure.
| The Devil's Niece 2/14/11 . chapter 1
I don't know what I'm more upset at, that there aren't more reviews for this or that this amazing story isn't getting enough attention. I loved it, especially the nickname for Alice.
| ScOut4It 2/13/11 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed the minute details that you put into the body language of Alice and how you were able to convey so much about her personality, situation, and background without really having to go into all the details about it.
The descriptions of their end of month mealtime with Alice drawing on Bella while she eats and then of the drawing that Bella looks at added a lot for explaining Alice's mood and their relationship with each other.
I'm glad that you explained the hairbrush but also that you didn't end up using it.
I'm also glad that Alice's pleasure during the spanking was emphasized along with her emotional connection/reaction to the event/s.
I'm also (again w/ the also :) glad that you showed the more tender interaction between both of them and especially the way that you had them get off the last time, and also how Alice puts Bella's hand back where she likes it most ;)
Yes, great story and I am about to discover if you have more femslash as that's the reason I frequent fanfiction and would like to read more of your work.
P.s. I like how you put them in London (where I'm assuming you're from based on the differences of certain words and spelling as well) and accurately compared the weather with Forks'.
I also really enjoyed the description of Bella's growing up as a tomboy, her masturbation to memories of mags, and the breaking the arm while punching her childhood friend that wasn't thinking of her in the way that she wanted.
| Camilla Martin 2/10/11 . chapter 1
This was such a moving story in so many ways. It was sensual and passionate while also being so deeply meaningful. I loved the natural progression of this story, from beginning to end. Great work.