Excellent! Very nice writing and you gave some great description of the environement and emotions. I love how you describe Dark Starkiller, perfect!

I hope there is more coming cause this is very epic. Enjoyed the read :)

I will have to say I hate this. First of all, you made the good Starkiller, who hates the Dark Side, take over the world! YOU SUCK!

Cool story, not many write for the dark side ending. Cool beans.

Better and better. Whens the next chapter?

Great 1st chapter !

Awesome chapter.

Interesting.