|Reviews for An Ordinary Life|
| BiblioMatsuri 8/15/12 . chapter 1
Winry is a tease, and Ed is just too easy a target with that hair-trigger temper of his.
Nitpicks: You have a few typos of the wrong-capitalization sort, and the Fuhrer's actual name is King Bradley. Fuhrer is a title.
| Tomon 7/21/12 . chapter 1
Cute :) Exactly in the style of Ed proposing at the end of manga xD I can even see his expression through your story
| Crystal shadow7 2/20/11 . chapter 1
An excellent, cute oneshot.
| morbid333 2/8/11 . chapter 1
Since I saw this mentioned on your profile, I've been wondering if you'd write anything for it. Now I don't need to ask.
I haven't actually seen brotherhood, but I have the full collection, including the movie, of the older series. Anyway, I'm glad you wrote this. This was an extremely good one-shot, especially for a first attempt.
The author I used to be subscribed to for FMA fanfiction changed accounts, but she(?) had a memorable two-story series that I can't recall the title of, (ironic? disrespectful? perhaps, but I'm no good with titles,) although the chapters were pretty short, but updates were fast. I don't recall if they were daily, but there were multiple updates per week, kind of like the way you used to update back then. Come to think of it, I subscribed to her around about the same time I started reading your Naruto stories.
In any case, if you decide to do more in this catagory, I'll be among those to read them.
| RAND22 2/8/11 . chapter 1
I liked this. It was kind of endearing in a way, and perfectly fits in universe with the show, and you've captured Ed and Winry's relationship perfectly.
| ElfenSky 2/8/11 . chapter 1
lol.. the ending was certainly funy XD
| OursIsTheFuryWriter 2/8/11 . chapter 1
Very good, I enjoyed the way you portrayed Ed and Winry's attitudes and how they interacted not just with each other but Alphonse and Pinako as well. A lovely Oneshot. Hope to see more in this section in the future.
| Nate Grey 2/7/11 . chapter 1
Nice, I had forgotten all about this anime. Thanks for the reminder.
| DominoEFX 2/7/11 . chapter 1
Ya know that thing ya do where you take a seemingly short and sweet story and make it in to one of the best and most memorable pieces on this site? Yeah do that again
| Siriusly Grim 2/7/11 . chapter 1
Ha good short story. Very light and good natured at first, then a heavy message that makes sense; not to mention a fully developed story line. Thats the reason you have so many fans
| LinkOOT 2/7/11 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really good considering its only a one shot and your first attempt at FMA. Mind you, I wasnt expecting anything less, you are one of the best.
| Victorules 2/7/11 . chapter 1
You should dabble more often in the world of Fullmetal Alchemist
| Lonely Stalker 2/7/11 . chapter 1
| signora del cielo delle stelle 2/7/11 . chapter 1
Awesome! Admittedly, the beginning sounded a lot like what happened in the manga, but otherwise it was good.
| matrice 2/7/11 . chapter 1
Funny one shot. I liked this series.