Winry is a tease, and Ed is just too easy a target with that hair-trigger temper of his.

Nitpicks: You have a few typos of the wrong-capitalization sort, and the Fuhrer's actual name is King Bradley. Fuhrer is a title.

Cute :) Exactly in the style of Ed proposing at the end of manga xD I can even see his expression through your story

An excellent, cute oneshot.

Since I saw this mentioned on your profile, I've been wondering if you'd write anything for it. Now I don't need to ask.

I haven't actually seen brotherhood, but I have the full collection, including the movie, of the older series. Anyway, I'm glad you wrote this. This was an extremely good one-shot, especially for a first attempt.

The author I used to be subscribed to for FMA fanfiction changed accounts, but she(?) had a memorable two-story series that I can't recall the title of, (ironic? disrespectful? perhaps, but I'm no good with titles,) although the chapters were pretty short, but updates were fast. I don't recall if they were daily, but there were multiple updates per week, kind of like the way you used to update back then. Come to think of it, I subscribed to her around about the same time I started reading your Naruto stories.

In any case, if you decide to do more in this catagory, I'll be among those to read them.

I liked this. It was kind of endearing in a way, and perfectly fits in universe with the show, and you've captured Ed and Winry's relationship perfectly.

Well done

lol.. the ending was certainly funy XD

Very good, I enjoyed the way you portrayed Ed and Winry's attitudes and how they interacted not just with each other but Alphonse and Pinako as well. A lovely Oneshot. Hope to see more in this section in the future.

Dragon

Nice, I had forgotten all about this anime. Thanks for the reminder.

Ya know that thing ya do where you take a seemingly short and sweet story and make it in to one of the best and most memorable pieces on this site? Yeah do that again

Ha good short story. Very light and good natured at first, then a heavy message that makes sense; not to mention a fully developed story line. Thats the reason you have so many fans

Wow, that was really good considering its only a one shot and your first attempt at FMA. Mind you, I wasnt expecting anything less, you are one of the best.

You should dabble more often in the world of Fullmetal Alchemist

3 adorable

Awesome! Admittedly, the beginning sounded a lot like what happened in the manga, but otherwise it was good.

Funny one shot. I liked this series.