MULTI CHAPTER! I luv luv luv this story! D

I vote for a multi-chapter! :D

Definitley keep going with this ;D

I was reading the story and I was like- Heyyyy, where's eyebrows?

AND THEN- BAM. You mention them being afraid to tell him about it.

Kendall's one freaky boy. Lol. You're doing REALLY well with this story :D

I love how you write, actually. It's got really great grammar, and you put in enough to make the readers able to PICTURE the entire scene before them. So great work :)

I really hope you continue this as a multichap. Maybe a short one :) This was great!

You should continue you really should this is a very good story!

This was really good to see the aftermath, I think you should continue it's really good you are such a good writer .