Hope more is coming soon. I just caught up and want more!

On my gosh! You can't leave it there! Please post more soon!

That has to be one of the saddest parts of a story I have ever read. One moment everyone is happy and chatting and the next NG is being locked up and separated from his and Jack's kids. No wonder he is acting the way he is! I can't imagine anything more traumatic than what the rest of the team did, even as I understand why they did what they did. Poor Jack! Just when he gets a chance of a normal life with someone, it gets screwed up again. I hope the team can fix this for him and NG, because this will be too sad otherwise.

Another fabulous chapter. There is a lot of stuff going on, but you do such a great job of weaving it all together that I can't wait to read the next one. Keep on writing!

Wow! What a power ending. Jack is right, Andy and Mark need to work it out together because they're the same person.

I can't believe I spent all day reading this story but I had to catch up and now I have to wait for more. Post soon so we can all find out what happens to everyone!

This has to be one of the best Jack lines I've ever read

"I use to love flirting with your Dad, your mother as well. Hell, I just like flirting. It invigorates the soul, makes you feel like you have a bit of control over those around you"

That is so Jack!

That made me feel so sad for poor NG. He is like a pawn in this, and the children as well. I hope they find a solution to help him!

I so hope they won't have to cage NG! That seems so wrong somehow!

Oh this is lovely. The chance for Mark to see his long lost son is something I wasn't expecting. I hope he stays long enough to see him.

I like the idea of Jack in the future checking up on everyone. It seems so right. But I wonder what be means about letting NG go. Does he mean that NG will live him at some point? I have to keep on reading because I want to know what happens

Oh, I hope everything works out and that dream that NG had of the future with Jack and the kids becomes a reality. He needs to have a bright future after all he has been through.

I love them all, but I love Mark running off to do what he can to save his son. They're tied together in so many ways, I bet he feels like it is all his fault what is happening now.

Hope he can find a cure!

I love it when the team goes all Torchwoody. It reminds me that they're more than a family, they still have jobs to do.

Poor NG has been through hell and back. I hope he gets a break soon, because he deserves it.

I love how you tie in his jump to the future to Mark getting used by the Creatures in the past. It's such a brilliant idea of how an event can happen and so Torchwood!

Oh no! I hope NG is okay! I'm not sure which I'm more scared about, those moonstones messing with him some more or the aliens. And poor Pado!

Wow, this issue is a tough one for the team. I hope they come up with a solution that doesn't involve caging NG for the rest of his life! I know I wouldn't want that!