I liked your viewpoint; your Zero is very sweet on the inside, but very protective too... it was interesting to see Kaname from his perspective. I thought your dialogue worked very well; he's not very talkative, but his character really showed through what you had to work with...nice job! :)

i think it was lovely.. the unconversatinal scene was necessary for it was all there in the manga itself, because it was zero's pov to begin with