puh...I'm trough!
At the beginning I really was in love with the story, then I began to hate it, and now I'm not sure what to say...
Scott and Diane are interesting characters but sometimes they could really get annoying. Jasper was a bit frightening to me. He always got angry even if there wasn't a big deal! I always thought he was the calm one. He even snapped at Carlisle! Well, I guess he was just a bit out of character. And I couldn't understand that everyone - especially Jasper - considered Scott and Diane as family soo fast! I don't mean to offend you, but it just doesn't make sense to me. Sorry. :)
It's also confusing that the Cullens actually WON against the VOLTURI even WITHOUT Bella's shield and the pack!
Plus the whole story with Yani and all that stuff was annoying.
But I'm glad that Alice and Jasper REALLY showed up! Because at the beginning I was afraid they won't show up anymore!

Finally - after the bad things - I have to say that you're really a good writer! That the story wasn't mine, doesn't mean that your writing isn't good. Actually - I must admit - it's incredible!
I think I wouldn't be able to write such a long story!

So please don't hate me just because I was confused with a few things! :D

lol

PS: Sorry for my bad english! I'm german.

Wow! I'm in love with this story...so far. But I wish there would be more about Alice & Jasper since they're marked!
...I'm going to read on...

Diane and Scott are kind of getting annoying... I hope they improve.

Again this story is great. Can't wait to read more and am adding to my favorites.

Just found this story. It is really good and I look forward to the future chapters.

Aro is such a sneaky freak! I'm hoping that he ends up dead and quits messing with them!

This is still great the second time around! I can't remember who was on the boat - And I'm excited to find out. Hope it's in the next chapter!

I'm re-reading this for the second time and am enjoying it just as much as the first! I've been reading Spinal Cord and wanted to come back to the original as I'm between updates.

It's a really good story and I really like your original characters.

Just wanted to leave you a little more love. :)

THIS WAS AN AWESOME FIC I'LL READ YOUR SEQEL TOTALLY! I ENJOY CAPSLOX! YAY!

The only thing I can say about this story: ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! Congratulations! It was perfect in every way. Happy, sad and a very happy ending. GREAT JOB! Do you usually write fan fics about Twilight? Have more? Let me know the titles...thank you.

OK - I just want to start with I normally do not care for original characters because to me they don't seem to fit into the story.

But I'm GLAD I got into your story because it was FANTASTIC! You really meshed your OC's into the story line and had enough drama/angst to keep me interested. You writing is GREAT and you do a wonderful job painting your story with your words. I loved Scott and Diane and can't wait to read more about their trip and what comes up in the next year for them.

So thank you for writing such a great OC story and for showing me that I shouldn't write those type of stories off because I've found one that I would have been sad to have missed.

Can't wait to start on the sequel!

Jess

this was excellent.i found this thanks to the FanFiction Frenzey with YWW! i will def be continuing to read on. Good job!

You should never play with Alices visions! Do people not realize that?:) Anyway, amazing and very well written!

Wow! This story is very intriging! I love where you have taken it and can't wait for the end!

VEry unexpected!