This is so good please update soon I really enjoyed reading this story I have not read many like it and I would like to say this is beyond awesome. I look forward to your next update until then...

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Cats and dogs HATE each other! Although that may be true, it is sometimes said in early Egyptian mythology that they were husband and wife. A lot of the facts are conflicting. If you search up "George Washington", it'll probably give you the same thing on pretty much every site, book, etc. But different people believed different things so a lot of references will say different things about Egyptian, Greek, Norse mythology. I just can't help it, okay? Don't stop the good work!

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This Is such a good story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I just don't know what to say, sorry for that.

But then, the favorite should be obvious enough.

OMR! its amazing! LOVE it!

OMG! i love it! dang it why did you leave it a cliff hanger! NEW CHAPTER!

i love it! its very detailed and i love how you know the mythology as well. new chapter!

You're story is very good. A few spelling errors and if this is based on actual mythology, you may want to check you're sources. Most of the names and relations are correct but some are a bit fuzzy. It has a lot of potential and I look forward to reading more.

its really good! i love how you showed the creation of the gods. Bast is so cute! Continue!