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Crazed Anemone 7/25/06 . chapter 19
Such a well-written story... so please update soon. :) oh and chapter 17 almost made me cry. so sad... *hugs air*
Getto 820 7/20/06 . chapter 19
I just read all the chapters of your story adn I loved it! I needed something to occupy my boring summer and your storyu sure did the trick! I just can't wait till you update! you are a great...awesome writer. You have great talent! I love all the characters!

UPDATE SOON! :)
snuffyTHEmonkey 4/20/06 . chapter 19
oh dear... if you say that you cant believe that you updated.. does that mean i shouldnt wait and be pleasantly surprised the next time around? mm... well i read this a week ago but i started late at night and ended up going to bed around 3 so i never got around to reviewing. not like you'd notice the difference :P hahaha. but it was so awesomely good and i tried looking for it again but being stupid me i forgot to bookmark it or nething.. and FINALLY i have found it! YES! okok.

i love it because you have these tidbits about art.. and i'm an art fanatic and i was a specific art program in High School. reading about it made me think back of old presentations that we had to do and the personal artists statements of our art pieces.. ooh man... i remembering when i first started i tried to be "deep" and basically that turned out into a bunch of BS trying to impress ppl... but later on it was more genuine and believable.. not just.. oh i used green for jealousy etc... and i find your interpretations of the sculptures believable... which is a relief. newayz. sorry for the ramble there. i'm just overly excited at finding your fic again! and this time i'm adding it to my fav list and alert list.. so i wont lose it! yay!

ok so yeah. your story has inspired me to write my own.. authors like you, curdled milk, and Sheen just ooze out creative juices... but sadly my story is taking a long time to develop. i've thrashed around with it for more than two weeks now and i've written two versions.. and i'm still not happy. so i'm revamping my plot to a more simply and light one. i originally wanted to do an angsty storyline.. but being the amateur 'happy go lucky' person and wanna be writer as i am.. it is a futile struggle... which basically ended up with me pulling out my hair and sniveling. so i'm doing the smart thing.. and starting out small first... lalala. my first story will be an ode to all the greatest and my fav-est authors out there. i told curdled milk i'll dedicate it to her... but now i'm intimidated and scared... i'll shame her name! oh woe is me. okok. enough of this babble...

i hope with the hopest part of me... (this is why i'll never become a great writer like you guys) that you will update... maybe a few days after i post my story up? ahaha... i have a horrid reason for this request... first because it'll spur me on to writing.. cuz i do wanna read what happens next. and second.. so that ppl dont compare my stuff with yours... and not review :P i'm so selfish. I'M SORRY! :( ehehe. nevertheless.. i'm an avid fan of your work now! That counts for something I hope! yay! okok

you can finish this! RAH RAH RAH! (a sorry attempt at cheerleading)

-stm (snuffyTHEmonkey)
Juliana 4/9/06 . chapter 1
When will you update! I am so impatient. You are the best!
Sexual Deviant 3/23/06 . chapter 3
Another beautiful chapter, as expected. I love when I can eat and read stories at the same time. When I can't...the story is normally not that captivating. :D

Some milk and stick things that you normally dip in coffee babi.

Yum yums! Well I hope I will be able to at least get halfway through this fic because I have to go to a play in a hour and a half. Muahaha...:chokes again on milk this time: I should stop doing that.
Sexual Deviant 3/23/06 . chapter 2
You swear to Bob this is your first story ever written? O_0

The next J.K. Rowling EVERRYONE!

But seriously...

My ego just dropped several notches upon reading that...

Pfft I thought I was DECENT but this? Is unbelievable AND fresh AND original.

I am glad that it wasn't under false pretenses that this story would rock mah world...

I shall continue on ward then! Muahaha...hahaha :chokes:
Sexual Deviant 3/23/06 . chapter 1
Hmm

The first time I have read such a truly alternate universe story before. How I found you? Ah well your Hana Yori Dango site...just browsing for some information and BAM found your kickass site and another BAM found you have a fanfiction account. I am excited to read this because its so...FORMATTED! AND...GAH only like 6 paragraphs of Prologue but completely awesome and all these characters are of your own design...I find it fascinating. :D
mangadreams 2/25/06 . chapter 19
seemed to tie up some lose ends for me. enjoyed the chapter
pure2ND 2/25/06 . chapter 19
i've had this story on my to-reread list for a long time now, but only just got around to it this week. rediscovering it was a very enjoyable part of my vacation, and i'm so glad you updated again after so long. :) don't wait so long to write again; i hate not knowing how this all ends.

by the way, this reminds me a bit of another HYD AU fanfic, called Raka Eda Ni Kaerazu. if you have time, check it out; it's fantastic, just like yours! :)
hisa 2/15/06 . chapter 19
Hey! Wow...I was checking up on an update for another fanfiction and noticed that this was updated! I thought it was discontinued. I had to reread the whole thing to refresh my memory but it was an awesome use of my time. I really enjoyed reading it over again. I am anticipating the next chapter! Which I hope will be updated soon...because this seems to have actually been updated two months ago...

m I had just a teeny constructive criticism..but I forgot what it was. All I can remember is that sometimes during the story I felt like you didn't need to add these explainations because they could have been easily shown instead. I think there was this one part when you had the character explain something even though I already understood by the other character's actions...it felt a bit redundant. Sorry..I'm being very vague.

Anyway, other than that, I am dying to find out the whole story behind Nao! The suspense is killing me!

Thanks for the updateGood work!
Sam 2/12/06 . chapter 19
HEllo I'm a new reader. Hey did u know that they made this anime Hana Yori Dango a chinese movie. It's called Metero Garden or something, I watch both of them. ANyways I really like your story and I hope u could e-mail me when this story is updated, because I don't go on this website alot. I'm usually on ficpress.

anyways hope you update soon!
S A K U R A22 1/10/06 . chapter 19
awesome story! :D haha can't wait till chapter 19 comes out _v plz update son
blink128 12/24/05 . chapter 1
this fanfiction is really good. i only just found it and i love it. its so interesting. i hope you kept on writing this.
ice 12/12/05 . chapter 19
Wow! This is the first time I read your story and I sat down and read all 18 chapters in one go. Its great! Very good characterisation and you've really made it so that each character is very detailed with their own quirks. I have to say I wonder whats going to happen next, how is Isao going to take the fact that Nao's a Kuroda, and will they tell Kanjirou and Satoshi. Please update soon and I'm really looking forweard to whats going to happen. Must say that I'm hoping Nao ends up with Isao though. This is really good so please update soon and merry christmas!
iaka 12/12/05 . chapter 19
I just started to read this fanfic and was immediately lured in. I think that you did a good job with transitioning back and forth between scenes. Plus, the cliff hangers leave you begging for the next chapter. The main characters are well defined... though some of the lessor character's personalities are starting to blur together.
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