*beats head against desk* no... new... updates... for ...months... *cries*

please update soon! it's been such a long time... *sighs*

whoa, cool story! continue continue pls? i juz kept reading n reading n reading...plz update it soon...i lurve the story...at first i skipped it coz it had new characters but later as the story developed...i got snapped up! hahaha...well..keep it up n do grant my wish! byebye

wow.. i couldn't stop reading... it's such a great story and it's very well written. thank you... :). pls update soon... :).

I read the entire story from the beginning and I think I know what's going on- It's beautifuly done- I had to congratulate you! everyting just comes together in a very subtle way, that must be very hard.

it's a real talent you got- I absolutely adore this story!

can't wait to see more!

cordy.

hey! i read ur fic.. all 17 chapters of it at one shot.. now my eyes hurt! but its worth it! please update soon.. i can't wait to noe more about nao's past.. and although this is a diff HYD version, i would love it if u mentioned names from there *cough*TsukasaMakino*cough*

please update soon! _ i cant wait to see what happens next!

I'm getting more and more into this story as it goes on! Although it sometimes is difficult to NOT relate some of the characters to the characters in HYD, the story still manages to be unique in its own way. You probably have recieved a lot of compliments on your writing style already I like it as well. I thought I would get lost with all the characters but so far nothing is confusing to me. Keep up the great work! I am dying to read the next chapter!

please please please write more soon! please?

cant wait for the next chapter! please update soon!

When I was reading that Nao had a brother she never knew of, I thought of something funny. The relationships and intimacies within the Kuroda family is a little bit like Jerry Springer. Only with a much better plot and much deeper characters, and generally, much better writing.
I’ve been trying so hard to think of some constructive criticism to put in this review, but so far…I haven’t managed to come up with any yet. Perhaps to family er, interrelations were a little compacted, I had to get out a piece of paper and draw lots of lines ), but you did a much better job of explaining a complex issue than anyone else I’ve ever read.
I guess the only part that really itched me was the ending of that chapter. I don’t quite know why or how, but it just seemed a little loose, not quite a complete ending to a segment. But I’m sure you’ll find plenty who’ll disagree with me.
Congratulations on another brilliant chapter; you had me biting my nails all the way through, from sheer excitement!

i just don't but there something in this story that interest me i think this is a good story

sorry...that was actually your chapter 8 that wasn't working...it was numbered 9

*tear* Is it just me or is chapter 9 not working? I can see everything else except for thats one *shaking out of withdraw* Need more...such good story!

great story