This was SOOO good. I can't wait until you update! :D

revieww pleaseee! its so good(: but please add more draco hermione moments. if you continue to write this you should add their children(:

so i just read this whole story in a day! and im in love with its. Draco is my most fav boy in Harry Potter books.:) love him!:)i love the unexpected things uve put in this story, its was a shock to find that draco was He-who-must-not-be-named child! ah! crazy. so for the quoet things...

"i loved you once." "you dont know what you do to me."

"holy fish paste! 'name' you didnt know!" "cant be your little princess anymore. im not perfect anymore and i hurt too much."

my house is griffindor!:)

keep writing or i will hunt u down cut off ur toes and make u eat them! love ur work!:)

lovin' the story.. like the character,mercury so much..

some of the last chapters were a little bit slow and maybe lost direction, but now the story is back on track, and for that y congratulate you thank you :)

it's very nice to add this story to my watch list ;)

I've been reading this story for a few days now, and I like it very much :)

About this specific chapter, it's very nice, but the part with Mercury speaking mixed languages freaked me out.

Because of two small mistakes, that I will point not to be a grammar nazi, but to humbly ask for them to be fixed :)

They are this:

1: "No yo veia anyone" Which should be: "Yo no veía a anyone/nadie" or "No vi a nadie/anyone"

2: "but he wanted you muerte" should be "but he wanted you muerto" because she is talking to a male you, and so the final vowel is o (if female you, then it's an "a")

Sorry for bothering you with this, but I think next readers will appreciate not having this two things as distraction :)

Hugs and good luck

Inherited (un)attractiveness works just like maths:

Negative x negative positive

Positive x positive positive

Negative x positive negative.

My cousin: "I'm 25, stopped smoking and am Eurasian – Eurasians are the most beautiful people on earth– were I in a relationship now, it'd be a pity."

I read your whole story in a night and a day.

:)

Ella

Ps, awfully hard to decide, my favourite house is Hufflepuff, because they have to throw the best parties: Gryffs drink too much, Slytherins not at all: you can't show any weaknesses in a snake pit, and the Claws don't care for that kind of nonsense.

But I think I'd be in either Ravenclaw or Slytherin, because I am not that loyal. Ah whatever )

This is a quote from a picture but I still think it's really funny and awesome, It's about Hermione -

Hermione Granger... How do I begin to describe Hermione Granger

Luna: Hermone Granger is FLAWLESS

Cho: I hear her hair is ensured for 10,000 Galleons

Trelawny: I hear she does wand commercials... in JAPAN!

Hagrid: Her favorite subject is Charms

Lavender: One time she met Viktor Krum on a broomstick...

Umbridge:... And he told her she's pretty

Draco: One time she punched me in the face, it was AWESOME!'

I don't think most of them are true, here's another amazing one:

'JOIN THE DEATHEATERS,

Results not typical, your experiance may vary. Side effects may include fear of snakes, torture, mind control, being outsmarted by twelve year olds and death. Mudbloods need not apply.'

Also, (sorry it's so long I just love these):

"When I'm 80 years old and sitting in a rocking chair, I'll be reading Harry Potter. And my family will say to me, 'After all this time?' And I will say,'Always.'" - Alan Rickman.

They're so cool, I hope you like them, and if you haven't already seen them look up funny harry potter pics.

(I'm in Ravenclaw)

Gryffindor, by the way :3

Something I imagine one of the Mauraders saying to Severus Snape: "Your lips turned up into what was worryingly close to a smile. I was quite perturbed."

I LOVE THIS...and I promised I'd review so promise kept :)! I can't believe I didn't see that coming until it happened! Also I must show house support so...

"You fantastic fish you!" :D I'm going for Favorite and HufflePuff!

inatead of studying for my test thats 2hrs away ,i am reading ur story so plz complete it quickly.

Glad you liked my ginger quip;). Ok, so something fantastic... I'll go with funny again. I was in a skirt at a theatre downtown for a field trip. So this random dude walks up to me and goes, "Hey, babe, nice legs." So I told him, " 'Babe,' if you like legs... go to KFC." No joke. Wish I'd taken a pic of his face!

Slytherin all the way gurlyy. Update soon please!

Ok so I have a few...1.) wwsd what would scooby doo. 2.) well what had happened was. 3.) lets duet 4.)well... I would but the voices told me your a b***h 5.) severus snape...you know what they say about men with big noses 6.) of course id jump off the building...spiderman did it 7.)your just mad im more intelligent than you. No you may be smarter but not more intelligent. Thank you for proving my point. Thanks for reading! I am slytherin all the way!

Hufflepuff and Gryffindor equal " HARRY: Hermione can't draw, Hermione can't draw,

THE GANG: Hermione cannot draw.

She only reads books, And she can not draw, Even if she's reading A how to draw book." AVPS (A Very Potter Sequal) update soon! Pretty please.