I think the first chapter is a whole lot better and i hate Micah. The whole Bayar line can all die.

Fiona is pretty let her live.

Hey dont kill her off now.

I think I'll keep reading:) I love this series too! But why did the 2nd chapter have to end like that? It just stopped...

this is great,fiona' point of view isn't something we usually get to see. more please!

I love these books. you should write more chapters