that was cool, Marron died! *does victory dance* letz have a big party to celebrate the death of marron. oh yeah peace to all Marron haters and EW! to all marron lovers.

Yay! it has Trunks. I like it. Sorry can't read the rest of your chapter now. I have to get off. But don't worry i will. I added two new chapters to my buffy story and I'm working on my DBZ one. Oh and i think you should write a lord of the Rings story. It would be cool.

This was an awsome story! I loved the alternate ending! ::Grins, and gives thumbs up:: Good job.

hahahaha, thanks for the ending! keep writing!

loved both ends but this one more! u should write more storys like that LOL. loved it! keep writin ::wink::

hey this story so far itz freak yet still kinda funny in some spots. love it keep it ^ ::wink::

never give up on any final fantasy game

WWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTT??????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO alternate ENDING?!?!? NOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!! That was great! I am so glad I found this story again!!! Oh pleaaaaseeeee do alternate ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_____^ I liked it.

Hum hope you'll update soon ^_^

I would really like to shoot Trunks... Pan is cool! But Trunks is eeeeeeeeeeeevil evil....... Goten is way WAY WAY!! Cuter than Trunks is! And Trunks is named after things that go on guys' ::subject not appropriate for people born in March, more specifically March 21st:: hehehe I got you there!! ^_^ anyway... good story! Keep it up! And when you reviewed my story, I just thought you should know that I put in my story that you were Kirsten/DragonQueen dipstick... I should call you DairyQueen from now on... Hiya DAIRYQUEEN! hehe... sorry... DQ ya know... I'm bored... it's Friday at 3:33 and I don't know what to do... oh well.. ehehehhehehehehehe

Right... so I didn't understand that at all... oh well!! hehehe

Hey YOU! I watched Fear once and it was cooL!! There was this like, Army guy and he was in a pit saying to himself, "I belive in you Nahaul, I respect you, I believe in you, Please don't kill me!!" It was HILARIOUS!!! I don't remember what the Nahual/something or other was but parts of it were freaky... hehehehehehehe, by the way, this is funny--I mean cool too!

That was an awesome first chapter...i cant wait till the rest comes out! *wink*

Dont make pans incident too serious!! remember its rated pg-13! :P

whoa ok, this is freaky, PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

O.o I saw the episode with Kitty's cabin..... anyways NEED MORE STORY!!!! Please continue soom ^_^