Ronnoc: Well now I feel bad about destroying the world on Super Scribblenauts...

Connor: Type in MECH it's awesome!

I would never have thought of Scribblenauts the same way again if I hadn't just gotten Scribblenauts Unlimited. It introduces a plot of some sort! If you don't have it, then you should check it out.

Good job, by the way. You're quite talented.

Ooh, that was creepy. Definitely one of the best Scribblenauts stories I've ever read.
I hardly ever actually play the game, I mainly just mess around on the title-screen thing. I especially like Super Scribblenauts, you can make a ton of fun things with adjectives and I love summoning people so I can screw with them. ;) But now I'm seeing everything evil I do differently...

i wish this was a movie! -glob and the holy space core

this was really good, and yes, you have inspired me to write a scribblenauts fanfic of my own.

I never thought of a Scribblenaut to be an EVIL antagonist until the read this fic. I was a little wary at first (mostly due tobthe fact that I always looked at the Scribblenaut as a hero), but once I got a feel for the plot and how you incorporated everything into it, I decided to give your fic a chance.

Much to my approval too, not many writers can dismiss actual canonical facts and still make a successful story. You've done it however so this fic is definitely worth favoring!

A great read. 9/10 ! :))

*is speechless*

Well, I like the ending. There really is no way to challenge Maxwell... almost a semi-god. Also yay time travel! Causality issues! And when viewed from inside the horde, they probably are happy because they think they're happy etc... I'll not get into philosophical stuff here.

I freaking LOVED this story! It's a great deconstruction of Scribblenauts' entire premise - how would ordinary civilians think of Maxwell's mayhem? The answer is a disturbing one, but I feel it's still plausible. While the ending is depressing, there is hope left...

I'm faving this. :D

this story- Massively Awesome Best Scribblenaut Story Ever Created In The Entire Universe

if you haven't already guessed, this story will be favorited and reverenced

Holy crap.

That was an amazing story, especially for something as open-ended and plotless (moreorless) as Scribblenauts. It's a shame that the ending wasn't on a happy note, but i guess it was realistic. Unfortunately, I've yet to play Super Scribblenauts, but even then I could tell why the heroine's lucky item couldn't be formed. Nice Scribblenauts lore there, too; very believable, and very sinister. It was predictably random, but given the mood of the story it was more horrific than humourous, which was obviously what you were going for, so good job!

Really, a surprisingly good story for a category that has less than 50 stories atm. This should be something like an Ur Example of a Scribblenauts fanfic that they make you read before entering this category. I guess I'm rambling though, but awesome stories deserve to have their author's ass kissed, lol.

I would love to see this continued as a full-fledged story/epic, although that's obviously up to you. I can imagine it would be hard writing a victory in for the heroine without Maxwell's notebook somehow resetting that.

Favourited, of course. Once again, a terrific job!

Woah. That was a REALLY good story. Not to sound totally weird here, but I kind of LIKE it when protagonists become antagonists,just because of the change. This story is REALLY creative and- well- awesome! Thank you for the awesome story!

Pfft, Mary Sue

how is it that my story and your story r the only completed scribblenauts stories there are, and yet combinedwwe only have 5 reviews? ()'not counting ths one)

I love this story! I usually play as plumber, gamer or goth but artist looks pretty cool XD! The end bit was really inspiring, I think I might write a Scribblenauts fanfic now! Also I liked the thing about Maxwell killing the doppleganger on the moon (Is that the last level in the 5th cell constellation? Super Scribblenauts is the only Scribblenaut game I have). Favourited, and I hopre you continue this story maybe?

Noir x

Wow, looooong story. But it's good. The grammar and spelling was perfect (though after a while I found the italics when referencing Maxwell annoying) and...yeah. It was a good, new idea that was well written.

But you can't just stop it there! Please carry on! I have to know if Sally ever beats Maxwell, and how she does it. You left us on too much of a hang-on.