I like it, very much. Here's a question; Did you beat the game?

Sweet fic. There's hardly any ZHP stuff in the Internet... I hope you'll update soon!

-OverlordMao

Ahhh man... guess I won't be able to claim the place of "first ZHP fic" ever. STILL... I am inspired to write the best FANFICTION TO EVER BE REWRITTEN next to the VERY FIRST FAN FICTION ABOUT IT EVER WRITTEN.

Fav'd.