mark hit me up some time its been forever

I think Hinata should Man-up. When Mark and her are alone, she goes apeshit and attacks him to iniciate the beginning of a very bloody sparring session. Then when they are tired, she pounces on his ass and rapes him. That or, she lets her mask fall completely and talks to him in private, telling him that she truly loves him and whatnot.

He is either like he always is or where's a mask to hide all of his pain. In which case I believe he'd be put off by my first idea and would actually prefer Hinata to talk to him in private one night and allow her mask to completely crumble in front of him, and tell him her true feelings for him and her desires.

I wonder why you have this listed as a Nartuo/Kushina pairing. I mean, Naruto seems to really love his mother, but there has been no shown hints of anything further than that. I would also like to see Naruto end up with Kurenai and TenTen at the least. But, if possible, Anko as well. I'm assuming that Kushina would be the main woman of that family, hence why I didn't add her name, as I felt that she'd be a given.

Until next time. Later.

please update soon

it sweet mark.. i loved it lol

looks good, by the way the ficc will be a dark hinata/naruto/tenten or will you add some else?

Nice job on this chapter.I look forward to seeing how things go in the next chapter.

You fail grammar FOREVER.

Nice job on this chapter.I look forward to seeing how things go in the next chapter.