Such a good story. Please please please write more, can't wait for the rest of it. :)

Love the story can't wait for the rest of it.

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I do indeed like this story, and the rewrite was done well. However, try rereading the chapters out loud again, there are a few grammar/spelling errors.

I do hope to see more of this now!

Its good. I hope you post more. I can't wait to find out who shot her mother and why. Have a wonderful week. )

i have just one thing to say...

MORE PLEASE!

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nice start...i can't wait to see where you head with this.

Honestly you need to get a beta or re-read your stories before you post them because you have a lot of typos/mistakes. Also you need to work on getting both Mattie and LaBoeuf in character because right now they are acting like they're in 2010 instead of the late 1800s-early 1900s.

It took you forever to update! ... This was a sudden changes of events, I must say. So are the two gonna chase down some bad guys, or is mattie gonna marry laboeuf so they dont lose the farm? *LOL* i just imagined one of those anicestors from the Mulan movie going "not to mention we'll lose the farm!" LOL, sorry. Hope your muse doesn't stay away so long this time. I like True grit updates.

Hmmm...this is an odd fic. First of all, it seems like the world they're in is half-modern, half-True Grit World. I'm also getting both a Mattie/OC and a Mattie/LaBoeuf vibe from this. Try to make Mattie a bit more in character and it'll be great!

Awesome story so far! I absolutly adore it! I really hope you update soon plz and thank you!

A little forced, moving to fast. And Mattie is WAY out of character... but if you keep writing, I'll keep reading. meow