That was beautifully written and crafted. Great job!

I love stories like this that just tell little bits about the relationship between Beck and Jade. I don't get all that happening, but even though I'm confused about the timeline, I still love the insights

Wow, really, really good, very in character, and interesting, too. Can you tell me what actually happened though, cuz I'm kinda confused...

Wow, this is really good. I'm a fan. :D

Great job, I think this is really in character (I couldn't tell yah where, but yea I think I saw one bit sorta ooc). But it's written really well and I love it. Great job!

Did jade or beck or both of em die? Base so nice. Excellent. :D