please update this it has not been updated for a long long time and it would be a huge waste to leave something this good.

you should write more for this story i would like to see the reactions of the team to joe's problem.

Hello! Lurv the story! Just one question... what's hemophilia?

-LadyWizadmon

ps-again, great story!

wow! cool fic, really sad. two of my good female friends have hemophilia and one of them does lots and lots of sports! she doesn't let it keep her down. but one time in class, she didcute herself. it was kinda scary,she had to go to the hospital, and the cut wasn't even that bad. but it wouldn quit bleeding. this fic reminded me of that. very good job! lol.

You're good with Joe, you really have some emotional attatchement towards him. There wasn't much character development, you could have monologued a bit more, the paragraph structure was slightly bitty. You could have incorporated Jim more.

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...oooooh very well written, me being a slight fan of Joe. i wasn't expecting hemophilia but very nice )

write more! its good!

Yikes, poor Jyou-kun . . . that's gotta suck. Although it does explain why Jyou's so afraid of blood and such. Wonderful story. I loved the way you characterized the never-present Mrs. Kido. Keep up the good work!

Ah how refreshing. Joe with a disease. I think this was good, a little confusing but good.

That was so GOOD! I almost CRIED! I have to listen to my magic toenail song to cheer myself up.

Great! I really like how it all fits with the series. I've read lots of explantions of why Jyou acts like he does, and this is one of the best!

I especially like the last few deep and ,you did well with portraying Jyou's family...And his fear of blood,you examined it and got deep into his thoughts...I'm dozing off right now,so that's all I have to say.*adds to faves* There._-

Hey, nice job, well-written. Good reason for Joe's panic attacks. I liked it.

You captured Jyou's fear *perfectly*. I think that's really all I can say...and this would work as the premise for a story or as a stand-alone; I'll take it either way. This story is amazing.

*hits herself in the head* I read this on your site, but I'm so happy to come across it again! *ahem* Uhm, review, review... *ponders* This is fantastic, as fantastic as fantasic can be, being fantastic as it is, and all... it's fantastic, you're fantastic, Jyou's... a hemopheliac, which was frikken awesome, by the way. *sigh* You write good, I'll leave now.