que lindo!n_n

I loved this. Such a sweet story.

Sweet story, just go to another line when each person speaks and it would be perfect.

Awww! Too cute! I love it, it's super great! Dufort, Dufort shirtless...Ahh...*drool* WAIT, I CAN'T BE SAYING THIS! I'M ENGAGED TO ALLEN! *hugs Allen* Mrowr

Allen: Mrowr X3

(Allen's a character from another anime)

This story was adorable! Zeno fell in a river. XD Just like When Zeno got his foot stuck in the garbage disposal. XD

Aw that was sweet.

A little OOC though

They are kinda like brothers huh?

Well keep going! _

-Saya on the iPad

"Zeno might be clever and sly but when it comes to common sense he's dumber then a cockroach with a head injury"

OMG! :O