OMG! This first chapter is totally amazing! I like a lot how you reflect Puck's inner thoughts and your writing during the sexual encounter, it turned me on a lot...

:) Ending was sweet :D

Lol love the ending!

Hey...

I just want to start by saying that this story is amazing, definitely one of my favorites. I must have read it a thousand times! _ But I feel like there used to be a follow up story, about them during the summer. I think it started with Finn at the pool watching Will, and then ended with all of them camping. If you know anything about this, that would be great. But if you have no idea what I'm talking about, let me no anyway. Chao!

Amazing story!

The characterization is on point. Especially Puck.

Everything about this story is hot.

Lol...Finn was there? HOT!

Wait...so will likes Finn? Hmmm...this could be interesting. Puck will DEFINITELY not like that. Yep, I can totally understand Will in this chapter. He tries so hard to be perfect for everyone. Sometiems he just needs to relax and if it means more sex with Puck...im not complaining :)

Hot teachers are sent to plague us, i swear my history teacher in sixth year was completely crushworthy, but alas my approach would lead to being expelled and sent to a shrink lol. It's good for ficcing purposes but alas impractical in real life.

Loving the lead-in to the next chapter(s), Dave. Perhaps a nice weekend camping trip with Will's favourite students as a well-earned reward for all their (pardon the pun) *hard* work would be in order. Carole certainly wouldn't bat an eye towards such a thing. Finn's friendship with Puck is restored, Finn's grades improved dramatically (something any doting parent would approve), and best of all, there would be a responsible adult present to make certain both boys behaved properly.

I do wish I had had the nerve (and certainty) to try this particular tactic with a certain high school teacher of mine! He truly was a crush worthy example of academia's finest. Also, as I recall, quite single. Sigh. Had I the courage and imagination then that your story inspires now, I certainly would have enjoyed school far more!

More italicisation, if i had an actual desk i might even start slamming my head down on it, apologies again, but i still have no clue what's going on. It's not even registering my scene changes. Any ideas?

Again i have no idea why it's gone all bold and stuff. This is really really annoying me.

Don't ask me what's going on with the italicisation near the end, cos i have no freaking idea, i've tried fixing it multiple times by reuploading and replacing the documents but it doesn't work. Maybe its something to do with me preferring wps files. If anyone does know what the issue is please feel free to let me know.

WOW! Seven chapters in one day, and I loved them all! Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for next chapter(s).

That was a really hot story! I would have never thought about Puck and Shue. Great job!

OMG i love this :D thank you for your amazing writing skills haha