wow what a great chapter i always suspected the emperor killed indos son, so much has happened and it coming to a head, if both the emperor and Vader die it be like endor without the death star, cant wait for the next chapter

This was beautiful, as always. I love your portrayal of Vader!

Love it. Not much Han or Leia this chapter but look forward to more.

adlkjg I can't with this.

Vader! His feelings, his line of reasoning, his response - it was all so perfect. And I loved, loved, *loved* the part where Vader refers to Luke as his son, and Han knows just by that reaction that he's made the right decision.

Oh, and then you had to top off the Awesome with a splash of Rogue Squadron. Like, really. As if I can even handle that.

P.S. I (and I'm sure all of your fans) wish you a speedy recovery!

This is iastonishingly/i good. Epic in all the best senses of the word. I love it unreservedly and can hardly wait for more!

Awesome. If this was a book and I could read the next chapters I would never stop until I finished the book. You have so many clif hangers at the end of chapters. I love it and hate it. Looking for the next update.

Go Vader! Go! Yay! I LOVE how you use that grumpy old Siths faluts against himself!

Phew - took me all this time to get to this chapter - and now I almost wish I'd waited until you launched the next so I could just read on! No one write Han as you do! I mean it! Taking it to Vader - genious! And Palp's manipulations - brilliant! And now you're throwing in Rogues - and...Serri Corvino? Hmm? Just what color was that whipping hair? CAN'T WAIT!

"No, fine, we're all fine here, thanks. We're good… You?"

Ahaha, I wasn't expecting that.

Also, yesssss. The finale is so close I can taste it. Thanks for keeping a (relatively) consistent update schedule

Awesome. Brilliant. Thank you.

Absolutely perfect! The dialog between Han & Vader was riveting. In my mind's eye, I could picture their interplay and then Vader's internal thoughts were heart wrenching. I'm looking forward to your next few concluding chapters, but with a bit of sadness as I'll miss reading your wonderful storytelling! I hope you're feelin better & on the road to recovery.

YES! Go, PapaWolf!Vader for the win! You pulled that off really well, too. I really could not figure out what would happen when he learned who EXACTLY he had been beating the crud out of for a little under a decade...My guess was simultaneous mental implosion and explosion. I assume he's going to go through a "WHY AM I SUCH A GODAWFUL PERSON D: D: D:" stage later, but for right now, he has a job to do, and I absolutely love this vicious-tempered-by-protective streak.

Keep it up! I seriously love this story!

Ooooh the suspense! This is so amazing. THERE ARE FEELINGS EVERYWHERE!

Hope you feel better soon!

Wow! Really picking up speed now.

And Vader is finally on the right page. It seems that he's not quite ready to revert back to Anakin, but we'll see... And the rebels are NOT goïng to be very happy with Han, are they?

very powerful chapter, awesomely written!

thank you so much for sharing.

cant believe it's almost over.

anyway, I hope you get better and post the final two chapters soon :)

cheers