Great poem! I absolutely loved it! :D

So freaking adorable xDD

Awwww this is so sweeeet! I loved it to bits! No, you should write more poetry. This poetry of yours was very good, so I suggest that you write more. Anyways, great job! )

Awesome and really sweet! Great work! :D I love it! :)

XD I could literally hear Rukia making an "aww" noise, and Ichigo twitching and blushing, prompting him to say "midget". xD Awesome.

naww this was adorable

i really loved it :3

That was so good and...well, Ichigo-like.

Haha, brilliant! XD

If I told you "You did an AMAZING job on this fic",

Would you believe me?

...because this was BEAUTIFULLY written. Very lovely and honestly very believable from Ichigo's POV. Thanks for sharing okami11235, loved it! -Miko

Loved it.

Cute! Loved it!

the "Sorce of my power" thing makes sence to me. Isnt she the one that gave him his powers?

I loved it, the poem flows, and it has a nice rytham to it. Dont know why you said you didnt know why you wrote it. Its good.

Aw! So cute! Love it! And it made total sense to me the part of "the source of my power" eventhough I did read chap 436, it has always been clear to me Rukia is Ichigo's source of power :D

awwwww! this poems great! XD ICHIRUKI FTW!

Out of all the ones of yours I've read recently, I like this one the best. It has an emotional depth that the others didn't quite reach. The line about her being the source of his power brings together everything that makes Ichigo the hero that he is. His "raison d'etre" is Rukia and this poem shows it.

You might want to try writing something (a one-shot or short story) where he goes through each of these stanzas with her. It would be interesting to see what you could come up with.

Excellent job and I'll be on the look out for more.

Sincerely, DameM