|Reviews for Cœur de Loupe|
| ClosetFreak 6/1/04 . chapter 18
Wow, this story is just too beautifully written. Keep up the good work!
| Faylnn 5/30/04 . chapter 18
Was that the ending? I can't tell! If it is, this was an incredibly beautiful story and deserves far more praise than it's been given. I'm not a writer(though I try!)But I do consider myself an artist, or something akin to it, and your story has inspired more fan art than anything I have yet to read. I read your fic straight through and must now stay up the rest of the night and attempt to capture some of your words beauty on my paper. I probably won't be too successful but I shall try. The story was/is incredibly dark yet seemingly bright. I don't know how you did it but it is truly amazing. I'm babbling like an idiot because I've never been so awed by a fic before. I don't know that you will even see this since you have not updated for some time yet, but I would just like to put in my cents worth of commentary. Thank you for a truly wonderful writing. And may I just add that the use of French was a brilliant way to give something more to the story, even if I had trouble reading it at first. I didn’t realize you had translations at the end! _ Thank you again for this beautiful work of art. Oh and if that wasn't then end, please, by all means, write more. much much more.
sincerely , Faylnn
| Nova Moondust 5/27/04 . chapter 18
This is such an awsome story. I'm assuming you've stopped writing on it from the last update, but it would rock if you'd continue it. It's one of the best Sirius/Remus stories. It's also just such a sweet story and I really like it.
| ylinda 5/26/04 . chapter 18
Merci. Je sais qu'est-ce que tu avais fait, et je comprends qu'est-ce que tu avais voulu, maintenant. Je pense que je sais qu'est-ce qu'elle avait voulu, aussi.
Elle ne souriait pas comme moi.
Elle était tres belle.
Hope this helps
| Cybele Adam 5/25/04 . chapter 18
A French girl recommended this story to me some weeks ago, saying it was the most touching Sirius / Remus of the world"... And she was right, it's beautiful ! (Merci, Arcadiane. Grâce à toi, j'ai pu lire une très belle histoire de plus !)
I'll be glad to read the next chapter as soon as you publish it.
Your new French speaking reader.
Cybèle, 27, Belgium.
| LBx 5/23/04 . chapter 1
Lovely fic. Took me a few long nights to read it, but it was worth it. The mix with the French is a nice touch, too. Keep up the great work!
| Spam-in-a-can 5/19/04 . chapter 1
I actually found this story a long time ago a bit after Christmas. I absolutely fell in love with the plot and the story. The romance between Sirius and Remus in this story's so pure and sweet. You never see their friendship in the books enough, and seeing a ROMANCE in this fanfiction just fixes the gap a bit. I'm definitely going to add this to my favorites.
| icemint 5/16/04 . chapter 1
Alright! Great fic going. Taking french has its benefits. I actually understand what you're saying...heh )
| SoriBlack 5/15/04 . chapter 5
Wow, you honostly must be one of the greatest R/S fanfic writers of all time. You story dosent drag on, it flows wonderfully, and i never want ot stop reading. You have a great talent. The story seems so real in a sense. Its wonderul.
| Aishou 5/11/04 . chapter 18
You're writing is so wonderful, I can't ever get enough of it. This is probably the fourth time I read this piece. It my favorite of all that you have written and I hope someday that you will finish it. I have this horrible need to know how it ends. Your Remus and Sirius are so perfect that they make me cry. I hope someday that you being to publish your work. I'd buy anything and everything you wrote.
| FlameSolo 4/6/04 . chapter 18
magnificent. beautiful. enchanting.
it's frightfully good, really. i don't think i've ever read a better fanfic... and it gives some of the books i've read a fair shot for their money, too. it's really, honestly, truly terrific. it's also somewhat unsettling that this story has been left un-updated for a very long period of time, though... and i do hope it gets one soon, because it's just really so good. although... i can't see how this could possibly end.
| Rem 4/5/04 . chapter 18
_ Lady Jaida, are you ever going to finish this story? many of the people who read it have been waiting for well over two years! We love it... Does that seem pathetic? anyways, still lovely as ever. Maybe one day you'll be inspired to tell us the rest.
| Uruviel Silimaure 3/24/04 . chapter 18
*is too lazy to sign in and review*
I love your fic! Your writing style and characterization are unique and never boring, and the way you stylishly throw in French is brilliant. I enjoy that you don't overuse the French, you only add when necessary. I love Remus' father, as well as the odd and strangely satisfying relationship between Sirius and Remus. I've never seen character dynamic like that before, and its incredibly refreshing.
What do you mean, your "limited knowledge" of the French language? I've most assuredly seen worse, (far worse, *wince*). You handle it well. I haven't any complaints, except that last letter at the end of chapter eighteen (which, I pray every day, will not be that last chapter. I might well be sending you demanding fanmail, as I myself am a fan of threats. _)
The first sentence of the letter should probably be: Merci. Je sais ce que tu avoir fait, et je comprends ce que tu voulais maintenant. Je pense que je sais (by the way, nice differentiation between 'penser' and 'savoir') aussi ce qu'elle voulait.
Beautiful! More! Now!
| ChibiTenshiUsagi 3/10/04 . chapter 1
What beautiful story to have come across accidentally! You have seriously made my evening! (And I make your reviews an even 360! *_) Please write more soon! I'm really, really loving this fic!
| mydracomalfoy 2/22/04 . chapter 18
Words cannot describe your story. It is truly beautiful. I love the way that Sirius protects or at least tries to protect Remus from anything that could happen to him. Please continue with your story. Please! I really love it.