 LokYa 5/5/12 . chapter 1it is such a great one-shot, captured Damon and Elena perfectly.
It is sad but I can see it happened with the two. |
 lanixo 5/5/12 . chapter 1 This one shot captured DE perfectly. They are eachother's everything. Beautifully written. |
 chellethebelle 5/4/12 . chapter 1Wow. That was breathtaking. You captured the love story flawlessly. It was so perfect and the tone was just beautiful.
I cried, but not because it was sad, but because it was so beautiful. Thank you very much for this. |
 morvamp 5/4/12 . chapter 1This was downright perfect. So beautiful and heartwrenching, the same way DEs relationship never fails to be. I find it so deeply moving that she'd chose not to turn for him, and yet he remains by her side until her very last day... because as you said... she defines him; she's his everything. He ceases to exist in a world where she doesn't, and the ending just drove that point and me into tears.
Thank you so much for writing this. It was truly flawless. |
 thelovelybuttercup 1/6/12 . chapter 1That was... just beautiful. I am moved beyond words right now, but you deserve a review for your excellent work so I will try my hardest to make sense. You're right, the story is sad, but the beauty in the romantic melancholy is poetic. Losing a love, especially one as true as Damon's for Elena is heartbreaking, but his, peaceful calm about the fact is so moving. He isn't distraught and sobbing, he just accepts that now is the time they can truly be together forever and makes sure that it is so. The tone was perfect, the story was perfect... Just absolutely job well done. I applaud you. |
 LEXpressions 7/9/11 . chapter 1You've long been probably my favorite author ("Damon has that look that speaks of temptation and sin and sex, and Elena looks entirely too at home in that blue Chevy" is definitely one of my favorite lines ever), and even though they make me cry, sad fics always are some of my favorites. I thought this fic was beautifully written, as always. I also love how you didn't say Damon or Elena in the fic at all-that style is another favorite of mine, and it's something I made a point to do with my recently published True Blood fic, and an unfinished TVD one. I love the thought that the entire world knows who "her" is to Damon and who "he" is to Elena, they're that important. I hope that makes sense, like how your explanation made sense to me! Once again, love all of your fics so much, you're such a talented writer :) |
 Christy19 5/24/11 . chapter 1It was beautiful and so sad! And romantic! |
 SemperSomnium 5/9/11 . chapter 1This was heartbreaking. Beautiful, but heartbreaking. |
 iwantmoreshoes 3/19/11 . chapter 1I'm literally sobbing right now. So sad but so beautiful. |
 jahzara 3/15/11 . chapter 1 As a diehard shipper of Elena with either brother, you are steadily pulling me toward the dark side.
How beautiful. I love the concept or them identifying through each other and think it is easy to understand. I think its wonderful that you attempted the artistry of it.
The discussion on the wedding day was beautiful. Damon is not a poet, he's not Stefan, always saying the right thing. His simple statement was enough. For both of them. And when she didn't want to Turn...This story is the reason I read fanfic. I see Elena telling him that. And the little bit about Bonnie had me wanting to know what happened to everyone else.
I think the most I appreciate the most were that the characters were there. It wasn't some other world or you manipulating them to suit your own story, though fanfic is great for those purposes also. Sorry for the very long review but I really enjoy a good fanfic. So thank you for writing. |
 Asarin159 3/14/11 . chapter 1oh god, i actualy cried while reading this :( It was sad but realy well written, i would like more flashbacks from their life together but these were just enough to fully catch the emotions and express what you wnated to :)
good job |
 ThreeJays 3/12/11 . chapter 1Beautiful and tragic - a gift to the fanfiction community - thank you for sharing this with all of us |
 luliluana 3/12/11 . chapter 1I cried. So beautiful! |
 Zlhna 3/7/11 . chapter 1Loooooved it! I don't understand why everyone is so anxious for teenage girls to give up their lives. I sure as heck wouldn't! And Elena seems to have made it clear that at least at this point the idea of dying and becoming immortal isn't what she wants. I love that you showed the alternative in a provocative, sweet way. Definitely one of the best Damon/Elena stories I've read. I hope you write more one-shots soon!
And yes- love how you never used their names. Very clever :) |
 Bee 2/23/11 . chapter 1 Hey Lady Knight 1512, i loved your story so much,i was teary eyed by the end of it.I agree with you this can be an alternate ending to the epic love story of i enjoyed this,i enjoyed more your beautiful representation of this story but i was expecting you to describe their wedding day in more summation i loved your story and i hope to read more intriguing and exciting stuff from you. t.c.&god bless you. |