i like it. update soon!

Thw first chapter has already made me love this story. I also feel sad that Naruto and Hinata did't make it back with the others. I can't wait to see what happens next. What are the changes that the others will make and how will it affect this timeline? Please update soon.

Well love that you didn't send the normal back in time. People almost always send Naruto, Kakashi, or Sasuke back in time to change things. So brownie points for sending not sticking to the norm! Well if you decide that you want me to beta your story just send me and email ().

K-kit

Other some bad grammar it a pretty good start. And I can beta for u if u want.

sweet!

I found mispell 'sema' at the bottom of the page where iruka appear. Correction is 'same'.

good idea go grab a beat-reader.

I like this story

Please update! (Sorry, can't come with a better review)

I like your concept and story, but there are a few grammar mistakes. But other than that keep up the good work.

Hihi! Uhm, i think you have a good concept for the story, but the english makes it sorta hard to understand. If you want, I'm willing to beta for you, but i have no idea if that means that i help you edit the story, or to add on little tidbits to the storyline... :) let me know? Keep up the good work with the concept and maybe throw in a little suspense!

Hello!

I have to say, that I really like the premise of your story. I look forward to seeing more!

As for your grammar, it could be a bit better, but there are some lifelong English speakers that couldn't do nearly as well as you have. The fact that you are trying and show a willingness to improve makes all the difference in the world to readers. Well, at least it mattered to me.

Keep up the great work, and don't let anything discourage you from continuing writing!

these chapters may be short but they're good.

very interesting the idea of left the others made the chance with naruto and hinata in the center, bye

Naruto and Hinata didn't travel back in time? I hope that somehow, they regain their memories of the future.

Get a beta. There are so many different minor errors it's not even funny. They all just grate on my nerves, sorry.

good intro, just a question, why in the category you say the ficc is a naruto/sakura if the pairing is naruto/hinata, for me is better because I liked more hinata than the others girls, so what about made the ficc a harem? of naruto/hinata/sakura/ino, in thes way you can made that sakura and ino help naruto and hinata to become strong, also it will be funny to see how the president of sasuke-emo fan club become cold to him and from one day to another they hate him, also sakura and ino will know what kind of person will be naruto in the future and also agree that hinata must be the first one, bye

Umm narusaku please not hinata that's why I'm reading and keep shikitema