God fic. Write more soon,

Good chapter. Write more soon

Good fic. Write more soon.

I really liked reading your story what a fasinating concept.

I do have one point you mentioned that Katie had a sister when she first met MacLeod because the sister normally baby sat but at the end there is no mention of her. I just wondered why?

Um..you're not going to leave it here at Chapt. 16 are you? That would be inordinately cruel! ;)

I'm a bit confused about the Chronicle. I thought initially that MacDonald had it and Katie took it. Then later there's a convoluted reference to Katie having taken it from Duncan? I'm confused. But then, that's not unusual for me!

No! God, no! Don't continue!

The conection of Duncan and Anne is so cold. They were in love, for crying out loud! Anne would recognize Duncan from across the street. You make them seem like aquaintences and not close friends. With close friends, they can still connect after many years apart.

Ok, you can make the story any way you like. It just doesn't have "spark" for me. For the other readers who want to read this, try to seperate the conversations, you have them all bunched up and it's hard to tell who is talking to whom.

Interesting concept about the paternity thing. Don't be afraid to draw things out a bit. You are doing a wonderful job and if you feel like really delving further into the characters and their relationships ... please do.

Will be watching for more!

ok here's one review begging for more!

Just a suggestion: If you can update more frequently. Its been so long since you updated I'm gonna have to go back and re-read to see if you're still making sense ;)

Love your fic. What well happen next? Write more soon.

Great fic. Well you write more?

"hopefully get you thinking?" That seems a slight understatement. Please please don't make the ROG the bad guy, I really don't want to see him whacked, especially by Mac. Ilove the idea of Mac being a father, does this mean Mary will be a pre-immie?

I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your story so far, and am looking foward to seeing where the story is going, so please write more, hopefully quickly:)

Gosh, you sure are adamant about wanting reviews, aren't you? But you're so right, they're what make this worth while.

So here's mine. First of all, i like the story. You draw a good plot from the in itself rather cliche idea of yes why not immortals being able to have children. I hope by the way to be reading your views soon on how this is possible. MacDonald's motive of vengeance is very credible, cudo's, but i don't quite understand how come Methos and Joe can be talking about it as if they were there to see it happen. I hope you'll get to that too.

Your style of writing is pleasant and fluent, maybe a little too fluent at times. Sorry if this sounds a little harsh, but i get the feeling that you're so anxious sometimes to work out the next thought in your head, that you forget to properly finish the former. What i do when i get that problem writing my fics is reread everything i've written as from a certain point and then try and take the next logical step. Keeps you from becoming incoherent.

Bottom line: i like. You keep writing, i'll keep reading.

interesting. continue please

The plot here is interesting- but it would be much easier to read if you broke it up into paragraphs after the characters speak...