That was funny, and well written. I love how he's starting to crush on her.

I love this! Please keep writing! Update soon!

Awwwe! Cute! Poor mutant! That's exactly how I thought about him in the movie, trying so hard, and still kind of failing! I hope you continue with this, it's really cute to read! Keep up the awesome writing! :D

Mmm...sarcastic much ? This Mahoney ,in this light ,reminds of someone I know...a little confused maybe? Hahaha luvya!

so this review is going to be based on the fact that i've seen Mr. Magorium's Wonder Emporium once in my entire life. I thought it was a good fic. I remembered the dialogue from the movie, which helped me place the story in the right setting. I think it was interesting how you did the whole scene from Mutant's POV it gave their relationship another dimension; as romantic almost instead of just the hints the movie gave as possiblymaybe liking each other a little bit. Anyway, it was well-written and I thought it was a nice fic. I liked it D