I like this story so far. It's very interesting. I actually find it more entertaining than the book. All the book was about was Ellie mooning over "A. William Wagner" and that bloody rose he gave her. I also like the politics...I think that's one of my favourite parts. The main the that bothers me is the stuff against democrats...I could go into a long tirade but that's not necessary. It was funny though, that line about "hopefully not short, blonde, and democratic."

i like the concept of this story, but it bothers me that ellie and will haven't met. are they even reincarnations, like in the book/movie?

also, this should be rated more than a K. i dont know about you, but generally the word f*** is considered inappropriate for all ages, which is what K is for.

Update pwease.

I'm glad he told her he liked her I hope to read more

Loved this and yay shes going to have a baby I hope to read more soon

I bet you my Avalon High stories that Martha has gone into labour.

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Loved this I cant wait for the baby to get there

AUGGHHH! (in a good way) amazing! continue please. really good story, one of the best in the fandom! update soon and write ridiculously well and fast.

I wonder what Will ment by this time Pretty please update again really soon

I swear it's like you update, die, come back to life and go back to square one, mate. :D Awwww...I wanted to see Will murder Marco! :( Nice chapter, by the way.

UPDATE MAN!

AWESOME story. i cant wait 4 da nxt chapters. WRITE LIKE HELL!PS are dere any communities 4 AH? PLS PLS tell me!

You messed up big Will I hope to read more

He's so in denial. He's totally in love with her. And she's so in love with him. I know it. Hmmmm...I wonder how long until they finally confess their feelings for one another... Lovely chapter, by the way.

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Loved it I hope to read more

Loved this update again soon