Can we see a sequal on the horizon... approaching at lightning speeds.

This is a very great story and can't wait for the next chapter!

absalutely adorable! I love eevee and the evolutions, i've got loads aswell (on crystal) but only one female (a level 95 Umbreon called Star). Please please PLEASE write a sequel!

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eevee forever

Hurry and continue please, this is so cool. I have an eevee family in my game boy. Flareon has three kids ( two of whom have three kids each of their own) and 6 grandchildren. All together I have about 15 eevee's (and it's evolutions) in my gameboy (crystal version). I have drawn pictures of them and they are so cute. the grandkids all have nicknames.
They are as follows from oldest to youngest.

1) Shadow- an male Umbreon
2) Smokey- a male Flareon
3) Spirit- a male espeon
4) Static- a male Jolteon
5) Aurora- a female Vaporeon
6) Flash- a male EEvee

Please don't take my names! Aren't they cute!

great job Daniel. Its Casey by the way. Sarah's brother.

really really really good ppl continue

Quite cute.

... I was sure I had reviewed this one before ... ah, well.

You know, I think this is one of my favorites of yours. ^_^ It was described so innocently, and I absolutely loved that other trainer, for what reason I know not - maybe delve into /his/ point of view? Maybe he got the 'Vee from someone /else/ who had been abusing it? ... Gomen, I guess I'm just partial to guys with ... green ... hair. c.c;

I LOVED Mike's gramma! X3 She was a neat lil' ol' lady. The fact that Grampa didn't know about her being a trainer was nice, too, and the only problem I have with the ficcie at all is that you kept switching tenses. I can't really be upset about that, though, because I do, too - it's a habit, man! A lousy, stinkin' habit! ... I'll stop.

Make a sequel! It'd really do great. :D Se-quel! Se-quel! Se-quel!

That last part was pretty funny! I think you should write a sequel! You realy should!


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Oh what jokes LOL gotta love Eevee! Hey, that actually helped my writers' block a bit for Six Elements. Can't wait for chapter 2.

good story. Is there any particular reason Mike had two dark types? And will Shadow end up becoming an umbreon?

LOL! THis is so kewl!

Very funny. Eevee BOUNCE? LOL x 100. This is fantastic.

"Second note to self: Earthquake rocks," I muttered. Shadow nodded..."

-Very very funny. People, read this!

It's really cute!