OMG! Yes! I've kinda been waiting for hetalia to mention this just cuz I love telling that story for one. And for two: I just imagine hetalia handling it in the most awesome way ever.

yeah pen things quite funny an ordainary brio would work but pencils would pose a problem as the lead could break of and get in machines still i really like this story i like it when ivan tops he would make a cute bottom though...

PFFT. I remember reading about the pen thing somewhere. I lol'd. XD

I lurve this

Almost exactly how that probably went! At least in a fangirl perspective with the sex XD but who can deny sex, da? İt is necessary to form alliances, da? Using billion dollar pens as dildos, da? Da? XD

Haha, so wtf happened to that buffalo swinging strength of yours, America?

This was pretty cute towards the end! The smut itself was a bit rushed, but I'm sure you'll get better with practice! And I'd be happy to read that practice...lots of yummy practice...fufufu...*ahem* lol, sorry for the Hungary/France moment there.

hadfkjdhf. I'm gonna be an anal little bitch here, but the whole "America using pen Russia using pencil thing" simply isn't true. Yes, it's true that America used a pen in space before Russia, but NASA never actually devloped the pen. No governmental funding was invested into the making of the "space pen", it was all done by Fisher, a private company. Furthermore, pencils, believe it or not, pose a hazard in space. The lead breaking can prove to be a major problem in zero gravity and the wood pencils are made of are combustible in space. Eventually, Russia also adopted the space pen as it was a safer alternative.

Ok. Anal rant done. Sorry about that; I grew up by NASA so I've heard this wive's tale a billion times and feel obligated to defend the only thing my hometown really had going for it. XD That said, I liekd the fic. Nice smut for the first time...I can never do anything close to smut..otl. This was pretty cute.

This is just such WIN.

I can totally see America in space going look at me I've got a pen that can write in space, motherfuckers! and Russia's holding a pencil like WTF man, you're just dumb.

China FTW!

This was random but it was...funny at the end.

And how it was surprise sex among other things.

Oh yeah I remember the idea with the pen totally3 XD

Good job on writing smut just keep it up or practice or what not! Ja.

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I ran out of wit to say.

The sex scene was really lacking, sadly. It was kind of a "This goes here, then they cum." Kind of thing. There's got to be some sort of emotional build up, description of feelings both physical and emotional. You can stand to improve greatly, but it was just a first attempt, so it's not a big deal.