Leave it to train to take something serious, and make it funny. Oh well. I loved how Train pawned that waitress. How funny. I mean, no one expect a little kid like train to take the time to read fine print on a poster of all things. And that "look of trouble" Train gave her, it left me smiling like an idiot. Well, that's bout all I have to say on this matter.

ferret nin

Reviewing :D

Pretty good, a bit short, but I'm guessing it wasn't meant to be all that long.

I loved Train's reaction to the poster, I can totally see him acting like that (The scenes with him acting like a child over milk come to mind).

Same thing with Sven when he just kept walking. I wonder what kind of verbal beating Train's going to get once he's out of there.

Poor waitress, she never stood a chance against the combined forces of cute, genius, and evil (Best. Combination. Ever.)

All in all, good job. If you ever decide to make a series of one-shots like this, I'd read it.

Sky

You crack me up!

I absolutely loved it!

It was so hilarious!lol!

You really are good at humorous stories!

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Excellent! It flowed nicely, like it actually WAS an episode of the series, only they cut it. (That makes almost no sense, but you get it, right?) What I mean is, it feels natural. So good on you!

Lolz... Loved it.

Gr8! It was awesome! never read a funnier fic!