have you stopped writing?

wow this is such a good fic, i hope that you update soon! You are really talented i cannot wait to find out what happens later in this story!

UPDATE!

Thanks

i do not want to here about anymore drugs or smokin

I just have to say...This is the best K rated story I have ever read! I think it's very interesting and I can't wait until your next update!

cool story. slapping him heh sounds like me. update soonish.

i love this fanfiction and please write more to this fanfiction! i really want to see what will happen next! so please write more!

it was good, but if it was a different woman besides pan it would have been better because trunks was already an adult when pan was under 12 and age should matter in this case since trunks should be old enough to be her freaking father!Please think more carefully about your story situations(the readers might be pissed, like for instance...me). GOOD TRY THOUGH...amature.

update soon
cool story

continue

hi! its been a while, anyways love the ficcy update soon!

hot story can wait for the other chappy hope u update soon please do please please

my god! trunks is such an incredible jerk! if i were pan, trunks would be in a world of pain. i think you should have the ending where pan wins a huge lawsuite against trunks for sexual harassment.

ah, the pity move, gets the independant women all the time. good fic!

hey!11 contineu soon

hey, kool story. finish up soon.