|Reviews for The red eyed traveler|
| 03-636 Ebullient Ancilla 5/20/13 . chapter 11
great work though you should work on your spelling here and there but overall good job
| 03-636 Ebullient Ancilla 4/19/13 . chapter 13
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| 03-636 Ebullient Ancilla 3/12/13 . chapter 15
| Grazehunter 6/15/12 . chapter 15
All I have to say for that last chapter is "Oh Shoot!" and "That's a shame, I likes that fellow too."
Other then grammar, you have a really good story plot going on. Keep working on it and maybe even add a bit more suspense. But these are only suggestions, and I like what your'e doing so far
| Kawaiikuchii 4/23/12 . chapter 15
Really good, please keep writing the grammar isn't very good but the story is, so I'd love to find out what else happens :):)
| I'm a Lover not a Hater 4/16/12 . chapter 15
Long time no update but I'm glad you did it.
| Sir Knight Silvayne 1/15/12 . chapter 10
Interesting. You need to add more dialog though and give a better description of the surroundings. You're doing a good job but I can tell that you can indeed do better.
| i forgot my name 10/8/11 . chapter 10
I wonder if she gets to meet delta. And is her big daddy still alive? Im saving your story to my phone :)
| corumb 9/8/11 . chapter 10
Eleanor is a real bitch!
| Bearybeary 9/4/11 . chapter 10
I felt pity for the little girl.
| I'm a Lover not a Hater 7/15/11 . chapter 8
Hehehe. 1 2 3 ain't getting any, with or without Marion.
| I'm a Lover not a Hater 7/4/11 . chapter 7
Would Dr. Lamb trust some scientist or a Big Sister which cares about the girls enough that she would never hurt them. I wonder. XD
| kwak73 6/10/11 . chapter 6
Intersting idea, and I like it. The action in the other chapters was good and I like the moral deciscions that follow with taking the little girls. Its kinda like the game. And I think most of us will be able to come up with why the are elites ;)
| I'm a Lover not a Hater 5/21/11 . chapter 6
Guilt is a strong force where it is present.
| ancientdragonduelist 5/15/11 . chapter 6
I like how the little girs are treted like friends here, but what happenes when they get a slug shoved down thier througts? And the mental conditioning? Keep things moving, I like this story.