*blinks in disbelief*

What the HELL was that? That was the worst piece of work I have ever read! Have you ever heard of SPELL-CHECK? I mean, come on! You're misspelling words even a five year old can get right! Your grammer is pathetic, you use no verb tenses whatsoever, and this is so blatently a Mary-Sue that it makes me want to vomit!

"Poor cats." remarked Ellis. Why the hell are the Scouts laughing at that? "Hello, Mrs. Vargas." stated a uniform man.

"Sure." replied Ellis. Who responds to Hello with SURE?

Not only that, but you disgraced Pokemon in this! You got the Applejacks saying incorrect! What complete, utter crap! Stop cutting school, go to English class, and for all our sakes, LEARN SOMETHING!

Finally, the great Dr. Thinker...again! _'' I'm Klonia off IFRoast if you didn't recognise me (well, that was pretty stupid of me anyway, seeing as you don't know me at all... but I know you and that makes it different, yah?) I wondered if I could MST this as my first for Mystery Science Theater 5000, my new series. Please reply at !

hello...

You're one of my favorite writers and I admire your work!

The MSTings to your stories are even more amusing, I'd have to say.

DIBS!

*sweatdrops* Is it okay if my friend MSTed this? No offence, it just... lends itself... to be riffed.

That was they best story I've ever redden! Very funy it was to make read this really!

Dctor Thinker, you are sort of respected at SVAM by the Mysters... but PLEASE... ::gives him a dictionary and an English teacher:: USE! SPELL RIGHT! FOR DA LOVE O' GOD!

Umm, not to flame or anything, but could you use coherent grammar in your stories. It was difficult to get into when I had to continuously decipher what was going on.

This is a great story...and I hope to a good amount of reviews...