Wow that was fantastic - all the chapters! I loved the shoe and sock parts :) I thought you handled the ur...intimate scene very well.

Fabulous - wonderfully emotive, meaningful and startlingly real without being overly smutty. After all, we are British... :)

Silver.

I liked the schmaltz (as I always do with H/R).

Great story and well written. I like the way they moved from nervousness to absolute certainty over the course of their dialogue.

Gorgeous, lovely, tastefully written and insightful. I absolutely loved reading this - and, by the way, the author's notes were almost as entertaining as the story itself... I was very impressed with the final chapter. Sounds like you have as much trouble writing that kind of thing as I do, but it came out wonderfully. I think you get wine for having written it - and maybe to help you out next time :)

*fans self* Woah! That was so hot! And you managed to do it so tastefully. Bravo! I adored this entire fic. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely, beautifully written story.

xx

That's brilliant!

What a lovely ending!

Gem x

I got to read both chapters back to back to my good fortune and thoroughly enjoyed both of them. For someone shy about writing bedroom stuff you didn't half get it right! The emotion was spot on. A lovely end to a lovely fic x

This was the perfect mix of sexy and sweet - just wonderful! I loved the sock moment, too.

"He went very still and stayed that way until she spoke again, stretching up to whisper in his ear, a confession just for him – small words, simple words, but enough for him to be convinced once and for all that the two of them together made a whole, that this was the way they should stay.

He returned the words without hesitation."

Absolutely stunning! :)

Lovely story! Thanks so much for writing. And I find the subtlety in bedroom-activity details to make it all more romantic, actually. Well done!

Ah, socks :D

Happy sighs nere. Sweet and gloriously unmelodramatic. Lovely stuff.

You're such a tease! But it's all so readable that I'm happy to wait ;-)

*flaps hands*

PERFECT! That's how they'd be together - so many fics write brilliant sex scenes but rarely are they so tender and true to character as this.

Beautiful...loved your Authors Note at the beginning by the way! Brilliant!

Thanks so much for this fic x

That was lovely!

I wanna know the bad joke about socks!

But that was really lovely; beautifully done.

Hell, I dug it. All of it. Fantastic job. You're right. It wasn't very explicit but was done quite tastefully. You have thoroughly romanced me.