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| Reviews for The Shadows of The Past |
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  Lucas 3/25/13 . chapter 30 Hey um could you STOP KILLING ME! I ALREADY DIED 3 TIMES! (What if..., Damaged Heart and this fic. |
| miscat 1/20/13 . chapter 30 "Jeff, im giving you Lucas's body maps. You must protect this vital information!" Well, that backfired. |
 TechnoFool 1/20/13 . chapter 29OH MY GOD! A bunch of emotions piling up in my chest, don't do that-DON'T TOY WITH MY EMOTIONS! Lucas and Fuel died! They died!? I'm so speechless-I'm crying-I'm- LUCAS...! No no nooo... I mean I know that everything comes to an end, but... He died and they and he and AND... OK-that's good writing a few spelling errors and grammar, um-really sad...so yeah... I'm having trouble accepting this, okay...?! Dx -TechnoFool |
| miscat 1/19/13 . chapter 29 No crying until the end... |
| TechnoFool 1/13/13 . chapter 27 Very suspenseful. A little confusing, but that's only cuz I myself can't understand the full concept. I am on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens next! Fuel is Gigicise!? Woah... That's... Deep... Kinda a bit aggravating for me since I like Fuel as his own person rather than him being Gigicise... But they're the same person. Shocking too. Just as shocking and sad as Lucas being Gigue/Giygas... I hope you make the next chapter soon! I can't wait! Please update soon. I really love it so far! But Lucas getting stabbed and then being as calm as ever when he greets his friends? The heck? A few typos and misused words, mainly the words then and than again. Although, that's a very common mistake I've seen you do. I would prefer that sometimes in a few previous chapters that in the dialogue you state which character says it like when they are in an argument, for example. Haha, you tricked me, thinking Fuel was gonna stab Ninten and Ness. Pfft. Very funny jokes too lol I was cracking up so much. Good luck for your next chapter, you have my support as always! -TechnoFool |
| TechnoFool 1/8/13 . chapter 4 You used "then" instead of "than." Than is a word used to compare, in your case, means you shoud use "than" in your previous sentences. |
| CarnileN 1/5/13 . chapter 25 This is just getting better. I wonder how the Death of the Undying will really be. |
| CarnileN 10/15/12 . chapter 23 I never imagined Lucas could play a prank to someone. And the one to Claus was quite funny |
| Chiny369 Nemo 9/24/12 . chapter 1 wow POOR lucas XD |
| Foxxel 9/2/12 . chapter 21 WOOH! Sorry I didn't see ya update, I was busy doing something And I know I have no rights to said this but, WHY YOU UPDATE SO LATEEE? I was waiting for like, uhhh I lost counts. .WAY.. I'm truly curious to see what's going to happen next! Soooooooo bye! |
| Chiny369 8/18/12 . chapter 20 or sky kidnapped Fuel want and see what happens |
| Foxxel 8/17/12 . chapter 20 I never get tired of reading these..It's just simply cool..AND THE BEST EARTHBOUND FANFIC EVA! I'm looking forward for your next chapter. |
| Foxxel 8/15/12 . chapter 19 I LOVE THIS STORY. Please, again, PLEASE continue. I LOVE DARK LUCAS! |
| Vall 8/5/12 . chapter 19 Hmm, thing haven't heat up from here. tee-hee-hee! I'll be watching you for next chapter... |
| Vlaus 8/4/12 . chapter 3 And he forgot to put on some clothes..That's just..Disturbing..*facepalm* |
