Reviews for Promises Unbroken
Mizuki ShiBara 6/1/12 . chapter 1
Cool story!
AfterDawn95 7/13/11 . chapter 6
oh my gosh you have to update soon! im so interested!

i love the way scenes are described, its really easy for me to understand! (keep it up!) Your story is really great, it made me shed tears a few times. Poor Claus, i just hope inari is gunna be reunited with him, i cant stand sad endings :p i would give this a 10/10! anywho GOODLUCK! .
lightfaith0606 4/28/11 . chapter 6
Dear Lord, that was long! XD

Hehe, a cat/robot named Hudson. XD Sorry, I can't imagine a name like that.

I... don't think I should enter the contest since I have no idea what this is all about... -"

Can't wait for the next chapter! And have fun at the State Music Festival!
lightfaith0606 4/28/11 . chapter 5
HOLY CRAP, what a twist! D8

But I like it! :D :3

I wonder what'll happen next chapter?
Taker's Soul Girl 4/23/11 . chapter 6
this is a great story. update soon.
Shadow Commando 4/18/11 . chapter 6
NOT THE BANANAS! D:

I wonder if they discovered her PSI, after all...
Rika-chan 4/18/11 . chapter 6
Mother FFFUUU-! Stupid phone! Anyway, aww, who's a good kitty, hudson?

Hudson: *RRRRRRRAAAAAAAWWWWWWWRRRRRRR*

Me: eh, I'm more of a dog person. I liked this chapter. Sallie has guns? FREDERICA YEAH! Anyone with guns (who's not out to get me) makes a happy Rika-Rei :) haha giselle and claus? No... wait, he wants to train inari? I see a reunion coming along :3
Rika-chan 4/18/11 . chapter 6
Hi, dis is RikaWitchOfMiracles and I am waaaaay too lazy to log in. :3

FOR THE LOVE OF HILARY DUFF ON A STICK (I love chuggaaconroy) this was amazing :) yes, that damn psi... I was running out of ideas. PK Light... eeeehhhhhhhhhhhhh... ooh, risk is here? Yeah!

Rei(therealrika): they took my children? EFF NO! I will not stand for this! *runs off to save them*

Chris: we're not your children!

Rei: IDGAF!

Risk: you sadistic bi-

Chris: OK
TaintedRainbow 4/18/11 . chapter 6
I CAN'T COME UP WITH ANYTHING D:

and i've been thinking for a hour...
Shadow Commando 4/6/11 . chapter 5
Sad face. :(

I hope she gets away soon. Maybe she could resQ Claus, too, no?
xXRikaWitchOfMiraclesXx 4/4/11 . chapter 5
*starts crying* OH, GISELLE! IF I COULD, I'D SEND CHRIS AND/OR RISK TO GO AND HELP YOU! But I can't *shot*

She found Claus? :O Oh no! Fassad... *Death-The-Kid-style kicks him/falcon kicks/ roundhouse kicks him across the face lol*

Kid: SYMMETRY!

Me: ... Fassad hates symmetry

Kid: WHAT? *destroys Fassad* THAT'S WHAT YOU GET FOR NOT BEING EVEN CLOSE TO SYMMETRIC, YOU FAT BASTARD!

Me: ... uh... yeah... go symmetry. I'm going to finish up this review now! Bye! This story is getting really good! :3
Pk Love Omega 4/3/11 . chapter 5
CLAUS! :D YAY!

ahhw, those two are cute together :3

Update soon! :)
TaintedRainbow 4/3/11 . chapter 5
XD you guys are hilarious AND good with suspence! _

Can't wait for more :3
Child at Heart Forever 4/2/11 . chapter 4
The ribbons! The ribbons! The ribbons! :O ..Sweet.

And now I have a ton of stuff to register in my mind...can't wait to see how you two'll top this chapter! but don't worry- I have enough peanut butter to survive the wait!

(Chuggaconroy FTW!)
lightfaith0606 3/27/11 . chapter 4
Wow, that was a good chapter! :D :3

...I want peanut butter now...

Question RML, what is the point of the game "Earthbound"?
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