| Reviews for Promises Unbroken |
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Mizuki ShiBara 6/1/12 . chapter 1Cool story! |
AfterDawn95 7/13/11 . chapter 6 oh my gosh you have to update soon! im so interested! i love the way scenes are described, its really easy for me to understand! (keep it up!) Your story is really great, it made me shed tears a few times. Poor Claus, i just hope inari is gunna be reunited with him, i cant stand sad endings :p i would give this a 10/10! anywho GOODLUCK! . |
lightfaith0606 4/28/11 . chapter 6Dear Lord, that was long! XD Hehe, a cat/robot named Hudson. XD Sorry, I can't imagine a name like that. I... don't think I should enter the contest since I have no idea what this is all about... -" Can't wait for the next chapter! And have fun at the State Music Festival! |
lightfaith0606 4/28/11 . chapter 5HOLY CRAP, what a twist! D8 But I like it! :D :3 I wonder what'll happen next chapter? |
Taker's Soul Girl 4/23/11 . chapter 6this is a great story. update soon. |
Shadow Commando 4/18/11 . chapter 6NOT THE BANANAS! D: I wonder if they discovered her PSI, after all... |
Rika-chan 4/18/11 . chapter 6 Mother FFFUUU-! Stupid phone! Anyway, aww, who's a good kitty, hudson? Hudson: *RRRRRRRAAAAAAAWWWWWWWRRRRRRR* Me: eh, I'm more of a dog person. I liked this chapter. Sallie has guns? FREDERICA YEAH! Anyone with guns (who's not out to get me) makes a happy Rika-Rei :) haha giselle and claus? No... wait, he wants to train inari? I see a reunion coming along :3 |
Rika-chan 4/18/11 . chapter 6 Hi, dis is RikaWitchOfMiracles and I am waaaaay too lazy to log in. :3 FOR THE LOVE OF HILARY DUFF ON A STICK (I love chuggaaconroy) this was amazing :) yes, that damn psi... I was running out of ideas. PK Light... eeeehhhhhhhhhhhhh... ooh, risk is here? Yeah! Rei(therealrika): they took my children? EFF NO! I will not stand for this! *runs off to save them* Chris: we're not your children! Rei: IDGAF! Risk: you sadistic bi- Chris: OK |
TaintedRainbow 4/18/11 . chapter 6I CAN'T COME UP WITH ANYTHING D: and i've been thinking for a hour... |
Shadow Commando 4/6/11 . chapter 5Sad face. :( I hope she gets away soon. Maybe she could resQ Claus, too, no? |
xXRikaWitchOfMiraclesXx 4/4/11 . chapter 5*starts crying* OH, GISELLE! IF I COULD, I'D SEND CHRIS AND/OR RISK TO GO AND HELP YOU! But I can't *shot* She found Claus? :O Oh no! Fassad... *Death-The-Kid-style kicks him/falcon kicks/ roundhouse kicks him across the face lol* Kid: SYMMETRY! Me: ... Fassad hates symmetry Kid: WHAT? *destroys Fassad* THAT'S WHAT YOU GET FOR NOT BEING EVEN CLOSE TO SYMMETRIC, YOU FAT BASTARD! Me: ... uh... yeah... go symmetry. I'm going to finish up this review now! Bye! This story is getting really good! :3 |
Pk Love Omega 4/3/11 . chapter 5CLAUS! :D YAY! ahhw, those two are cute together :3 Update soon! :) |
TaintedRainbow 4/3/11 . chapter 5XD you guys are hilarious AND good with suspence! _ Can't wait for more :3 |
Child at Heart Forever 4/2/11 . chapter 4The ribbons! The ribbons! The ribbons! :O ..Sweet. And now I have a ton of stuff to register in my mind...can't wait to see how you two'll top this chapter! but don't worry- I have enough peanut butter to survive the wait! (Chuggaconroy FTW!) |
lightfaith0606 3/27/11 . chapter 4Wow, that was a good chapter! :D :3 ...I want peanut butter now... Question RML, what is the point of the game "Earthbound"? |