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   Massydov 2/1/13 . chapter 1Hey, I liked it! Nice job! You should add some more detail to the next one. Make it a bit longer. :) |
| amisunderstoodlifesandy 11/19/12 . chapter 2 This story is awesome but I don't really know if you should just end it there. It has great potential in my opinion :) |
| BlackPancake 9/18/11 . chapter 2 Beautiful. Will there be more chapters? 3 |
| Emerald Ryuu Feather 8/30/11 . chapter 2 Ohhhh k...o.o |
| MasterSui 6/18/11 . chapter 2 more? pwease? |
| Belgii-chan 5/20/11 . chapter 2 aww this thing's cute and you end it D: ..i love it 3 |
| ivorywinterdemon 4/19/11 . chapter 1 what no butt sex? lol anyway it was pretty good |
| Emerald Ryuu Feather 4/1/11 . chapter 1 the cat and the canary. |
| WillowSioui 3/14/11 . chapter 1 Very good, but I have three small problems with it: 1) Florence, at the time, was very good to homosexual people. That is why Leonardo came back there after his apprenticeship. 2) Your sentence 'The young kissed the other again' doesn't make sense. 3) 'Ezio stroked mindlessly stroked' also doesn't make sense. Other than that, very good! R |
| chancake 3/14/11 . chapter 1 Ooohh well that was a fun read :D good job! Cake x |
| ardx 2/21/11 . chapter 1 Awww. So cute. I really like your story, and the characters sound alot like they are in the game. Can you write another chapter please? It really deserves it. |
| Won Tawn 2/13/11 . chapter 1 Oh, Twiny. :'D |
