i love you story, but please finish writting it,

it's great and i want to know the rest to read it.

Tanoha

the chappies are kinda-no offense-, um...let me see, how do i say it? oh yeah...SHORT!

Good start but your chapters are WAY to SHort. perhaps trying to put more details and dialogues into it. Anyways, good story

i DON'T THINK THIS BOOK WAS WELL PREPARED I MEAN IT WAS AN ALRIGHT STORY LINE BUT IT WAS WAY TOO SHORT AND THE STORY JUST U NO ENDS WITH NOTHIN AND ITS NOT THAT EXCITING

Awesome story! Keep writing! :)

awsome story cant wait for the end

UGH! I want more, as in, now! _ Keep it up, Tee. Lotsa luv,

Your own personal Jess. _