I think you have a great feel for the character and I really enjoyed reading them.

aw it was sad but happy at the same time in tht he saw ppl tht he loved again :)

Well written short. It's always interesting to examine the relationships of twins and siblings, ESPECIALLY Nuada and Nuala.

Oh god. Beautiful. Betrayed and alone. Why u.u?

Very interesting. I like the relationship you created between Nuada and Nuala. Very sweet and very emotional. I like it! :)

I'll say only a word: WOW!

This was a nice read, I liked the details, the structure of the story was well done and is written very well. 3 Overall I liked it a lot! D

Sniff sniff. This makes me think of my dead cat. Very good.

felt like a movie lols my friend))

this was a really good short story, it didn't make his death as sad-im glad he saw his mother again. and this was very well writen as always