Very nice story, I think this is the very first PelliXSoren I've seen since awhile... Thanks for that. I really like your writing style, it's really a model for a lot of people around here. I will make a Fanfic on Pelli and Soren, it might ressemble yours on this chapter's level. I'll give you some credit?

Hooray for Izzu! Way to go on the story mate!

You did a right fine job. I will be uploading my story later tonight.

I would appreciate it if you could be my first review.

I am warning you though, my story will shock you!