Awww... but that was a great comparison to the Phantom of the Opera.

This pov of the proposal seems more mature than the,actual,book. She actually considers J as a real possibility and what her role in the whole thing is. She feels somewhat less naïve ...

That was a lovely piece... I wouldn't go as far as to say that Jacob was just "infatuated" with Bella, I believe he had time and time again proven his love for her, but I'll admit that, if what Edward feels for Bella is the equivalent of imprinting (since she is his one and only possible mate for life), then it's true that Edwards' feelings are stronger.

Anyway, it was beautiful. Thanks for sharing!

I love this.

And I love you. xoxo