i'm not gonna try and sugarcoat it, here goes: what was that about? no offence, but is english not your first language? i have some friends from israel who write like that.

Well.

I won't say anything about this... whatever you call it because I didn't read it. Just the first paragraph.

So I got curious and actually read the reviews of your other works.

Well, thanks for the good laugh!

Your spelling just hurt my eyes but I'm sure you're doing it on purpose.

Or else, then I think you're a lost cause.

Miss Austen would certaintly turn in her grave if she ever had a copy of your 'work'.

I think you really need to use your spell-check and have someone beta this for vocabulary and punctuation. Very hard to follow a story, no matter how good it is, when there are so many mistakes. Sorry, I had to quit reading after the first few sentences.