Lovett. so much. I can really see this kind of thing happening.

I lmao'd.

Hahahahahahahaha! I love it! So much emotion in such a short piece! The last line nearly killed me!

They remind of Sid and Nancy, not a nuturing love, but very dangerous and they bring the others down.

So realisitc that they would have their wands pointed to each other under the table in a Mexican standoff.

Suz

xx

THIS is what I needed to make my evening more enjoyable.

You captured the relationship perfectly, and the visual image of the two just appearing in such condition was hilarious. Great job! )

Oh damn this was funny. As I know a bit more about your stories I can see why you wrote this. Hilarious. I can honestly see them acting like this. A stand off at the dinner table Only Bella and Rudy. You have really talent. Keep them coming.

Cali Girl

hahaha I absoluetly loved it..

It's completely how I imagined their relationship to be like.

Very violent.

It was so good :]

I liked it :D short, but I very well enjoyed it. I like how it gave just a moment's look into the lives of Bella and Roddy, rather than being one of those fanfics that's a lot of backstory. It's nice to have a piece of writing that captures their essence without having to explain it for a chapter first.

this is absolutely brilliant!