That's so like Fate to leave the hospital to keep her promise. I'm glad things turned out in the end. :)

Good read

Aw! that was super cute! Undying love, the best love of all. Yay! Go NanoFate!

Aw that was sooo cute that was great! And Adorable!

Sweet! i really like your stories... hope to read more from you zonarose! XD.. hope you can update soon

Its so cute that i cant help ask for more

Hello there. I’ve been trying to read your stories since a long time, but never set my mind and time to do so. Finally, after some sleep and almost 2 cans of Coke Cherry, I gave a shot to this first story of yours.

I really like when a story brings back those fond memories of their meeting, enemies becoming allies and finally, that promise over the bridge at the end of the first season. That’s because each of us has its own view of how their relationship was built up from scratch thanks to Nanoha’s desire to save Fate from her mother, then becoming friends as if nothing had happened (their battles over the Jewel Seeds I mean). Now you’re bringing up one subject always present there, what it means for them to be friends and maybe something more. Nice development and follow up until the end.

Well, time to read the next one.

eh? this story is going to be edited next year? i would definitely like the next chapter now ;P if it's an M! he he he

but this was really sweet. it would think nanoha would be thinking that fate had a secret admirer since she left lunch and everything...but i guess not.

i'm glad nanoha found fate at their special place ;P great 1st chapter!

Beautiful and heartwarming.

First I was kind of sad that we have never seen (and probably will never see) Nanoha and Fate's first kiss (or any kiss for that matter) in the anime.

The bright side of it is that in this little corner of fanfictions we can have a thousand and a thousand more different NanoFate first kisses and more.

You can add 1 for the M special chapter tally xD

Warm and fuzzy, scorching hot. NanoFate works on every level!

You're updating this next year? What? This is good. You have to update

This was a very cute story! Well written, the characters in character. And Nanoha jealous! D: That's so cute.

I look forward to the next chapter. :)