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Reviews for: Melted Cheese
Veritas Odium Parit 2/3/12 . chapter 1
Very nice, short and perfect.
demonlifehealer 2/27/11 . chapter 1
This story was very good! I imagine that Harry must get tired of being asked, "Are you alright?"
Becoming-Obsessed 2/15/11 . chapter 1
Adorkable! Truly adorkable.

-AMLF
Dragon MoonX 2/15/11 . chapter 1
Well, to be honest, it seems a little odd. I'm having a hard time imagining Snape acting like that with Harry, but still, I enjoyed it. Seems it had a little humor in it too. _ Not sure why, but it made me chuckle a little when Snape told him to be quiet and eat. I'm curious about what else you've written now. Might be rather interesting and worth my while to look through your other fics. Could be fun too.

On a scale of 1-10, I'll give this fic a 6. _ Keep writing.
Niryuu 2/14/11 . chapter 1
Love it, as always

Perfect and juuuuuuust what I wanted
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