I think it's a tiny bit harsh toward Harry, but that's what gives it an edge. It's a great expression of the way Ron must have felt when Harry's name came out of the cup. Good job.

Nicely written, always love to read your stuff, keep up the good work :)

The poetry is great...you have the essence of Ron (though slightly more bitter than we're used to). The fic feel unfinished somehow though...are you planning on writing a series from this?

*sniffles* Awww, so sad. Poor Ron. I liked the poem bits a lot; they were very well-written and expressed what Ron must have been feeling so perfectly.

Wonderful job.

~*Star