So cute...

I loved it...

Presentation 8.5/10

You clearly let me know that it was a one-shot. So that is all I expected and got.

Visuals 9.5/10

A very nice mental picture of the setting and behavior of Meimi and Asuka Jr.

Sound 10/10

This story is very well-written, nary a grammar error in sight. Words tell it like it is.

Awards 3 out of 10

Audio- This story sounds great when read aloud. Plus you said imagine "Junshin" being played.

Special- First story to recieve my final verdict.

Ease of Use- This story can be easily used in a Saint Tail anime or manga.

Final Score 9.3/10 "A"

A wonderful story. I guess because it's really possible...that the two could get stuck in an elevator, and even so...he might not want to take her in after all. _ Nice work!

An enjoyable and well-written fic. It was certainly a story that I could easily imagine being as a scene straight out of the manga. Nothing to complain about this. So, from one fellow university Canuck student to another, great job! _

it was a very sweet story, but why was saint tail crying?

The hunter and prey. What do you do with yourself when the hunt is over?

this si goodm, i liked it a lot.

i loved it update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon -)Kari(-

So cute! So cute! So beautiful! So beautiful!

Wai! That was really cute! I hope you write another one soon, there just aren't enough St. Tail fanfics out there! _ Keep up the good work! _

::applauds to Shi-chan:: Very good! I can see this happening, cause I don't think that Asuka really wants to know who St. Tail is, though he does know the truth deep inside.

"If that's a promise, I'll keep running." :;winks:: I loved that line in particular.

Keep up the good work!

Ahh! I like the ending! This is good!

Wounderful!

Very well typed, and a very good plot.

I just love the Saint Tail and Asuka Jr. moments!

Oy! Positively adorable! Write more, I ask, and be quick about it! _

Wahhhhhhhhhh!OOOOOOOHhhhh I love it. . First Saint Tail fic I've ever read!