awwww noah

Can I hear an "AMEN!" for all these lines?

"[...]"And it's not Finn I don't like… most of the time. But dude… He's such a prick to you!" He lifts his shoulders high for emphasis. "The way he treats you sometimes… He's a tool! And you're crazy, like, totally off your nut, but…" He sighs, his jaw ticking. "You deserve better than that."[...]"

"[...]"Are we like totally forgetting that he boned Santana and never told you?" He snorts, angry now. "Or that you just kissing me was somehow worse…?" He shakes his head. "Or that the whole time he was with Quinn, he was into you and kept making you think something could happen but then went right back to her?" He holds up a hand when she moves to interrupt. "And don't-don't blame it on the baby, Rachel. 'Coz Finn had a chance before that and he didn't take. Hell, he had a chance after the Beth thing and he didn't take it… It took Jesse St. Assface to get him to man-up!"[...]"

"[...]"Look… Finn's a good guy, he's just… He's not good enough." His eyes dart away and he knows, deep down, that neither is he, but hell, at least he'll try to be, at least he owns his shit. "'n 'm not… I'm not saying I'll be the best guy you ever get with, but… At least when you're with me, you'll know you're the only one I want… You'll know that the guy you're falling for is falling for you just as hard… That I won't change you or-or lie to you or be ashamed to be with you." He stares at her, sighing. "Maybe I'm not the nicest or the smartest or hell, even the coolest guy you'll ever date, but… I'll try the hardest."[...]"

"[...]I mean, yeah, he's cool in a really dopey kinda way, but… You're all like fire and passion and he's just… He's never gonna get that part of you. Never gonna get why you love Broadway or why New York matters so much or why you spend so much time dancing and singing… 'Coz he doesn't care if he gets stuck in Lima, he doesn't care if he never goes anywhere or makes a name for himself… He just likes having a girl on his arm, a girl that think he's the whole fucking world and you… You're worth more than just Finn Hudson's arm candy.[...]"

Liked a lot the story behind Rachel's number, just like I adored their sweet moment on the field

those two are jus sooo cute together lmao.

mel

Full of metaphorical awesome indeed. Loved it.

Puck taking action - I love it. All of those things he said had me cheeering for him and wishing Rachel woudl wake up and realize that he's right. I wish he would do this on the show. Considering that he always seems to have big revelation-lines, makes these statements that get everyone else up and moving, it fits perfectly with what we've seen of him and understand of him.

Great job!

Point for Puckleberry: he digs her crazy :) this battle isn't over yet tho. Evanberry vs. Puckleberry. Per usual, awesome story :D and of course great writing, keep writing stories :)

a really great story! if only the show would turn out this way

Love, love, love it. I really like how patient you've made Puck and how just generally awesome this is. Love it times a million.

SUCK ON THAT, HUDSON!

Very cute story. Loved how he was so honest with her.

Another good one.

i like it

This just gets better every time i read it.

Such a cute story! It had me laughing out loud!

I love your version of Puck and his internal monologue and also how he poured his heart out to Rachel but still managed to be a BAMF!

Awesome job!

:)

Are you sure you're not a write for Glee because you TOTALLY have Puck and Rachel's personalities down to a tee! I hope they get another shot at being together; I really liked the first Puckleberry .